infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, prompt 4 [1/2]
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:36:26 UTC
I didn't write for the full 50 mins, but here it is anyway!
"Maybe I should become a spokesman for all the victims of car crashes." Sungyeol with a bright smile as he looks down at the wreck of his legs. "After all, there's not much else I can do with my voice."
Myungsoo kind of wants to punch him. Sungjong frowns. "I think you're supposed to say spokesperson. Don't be sexist, hyung
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infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, prompt 4 [2/2]
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:37:11 UTC
Myungsoo closes the door, deliberately slow and quiet. The doctor is saying things to Sungyeol, long medical terms that Myungsoo knows don't mean will heal perfectly. He hopes anyway, even if there's an ugly part of him that he pushes far down that says hope is useless
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Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, prompt 4 [2/2]
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:46:47 UTC
i don't read infinite, but anon this is amazing and just the perfect kind of angst. ):
he doesn't want to look at Sungyeol, sitting shirtless on the bed and covered in marks that Myungsoo didn't put there SOBS actually a lot of these lines got me going and i'm kind of swallowing a lump in my throat right now. i love how it's... agitated, in a way, it makes it more heartbreaking for me ):
Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, prompt 4 [2/2]
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:53:34 UTC
wow thank you for reading even if you don't read infinite! ♥
..is it bad if I say I'm glad you feel sad? ): I really tried for emotional, so I'm glad you feel like it came across :) even if it is all angsty and everything ):
Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, prompt 4 [2/2]
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:59:46 UTC
anon don't feel bad!! angst is my favourite )': no shame. the most memorable fics for me are have all been angst, and it's not only because i'm like, a masochist l m a o i just think it leaves a much bigger impact than fluff. i love a well written angst ♥ really well done!
Re: infinite, myungsoo/sungyeol, prompt 4 [2/2]
anonymous
June 7 2011, 08:02:43 UTC
infinite are so adorable! so of course I had to write something sad ): I wish I could say 'blame the prompt!' but it's really all on me ): and I hate reading angst so idk why I wrote it!
thank you! I'm glad you liked it, even if it's saaad ):
Re: jonghyun/minho, prompt 6
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:53:39 UTC
i dont think jonghyun ever thinks, lmao. ty anon! i'm glad you think i got that down, because characterization will forever be the death of me, and! that's pretty much why they're my otp ♥
Re: jonghyun/minho, prompt 6
anonymous
June 7 2011, 08:39:40 UTC
lol point.
i just think they have so much to offer as a pairing! i mean, not gonna lie, most of the time when someone says jongho i think U S T but yeah lol otp time!! ok! they can be really sweet sometimes. i love the way jonghyun kind of curls into minho's chest when they hug ;~;
shinee, minkey, #6 (2/2)
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:41:05 UTC
“Why aren’t you studying?” a deep voice broke the serenity of Kibum’s night. Kibum lifted his lids slowly, his hands behind his head. He didn’t bother turning around, knowing that voice
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Re: shinee, minkey, #6 (2/2)
anonymous
June 7 2011, 07:56:36 UTC
don't worry, it worked without the italicizing anyway (:
this is so sweet. idk i feel like minkey is the most confused pairing in shinee lmao, i love how despite being the same age they're the ones that probably understand each other the least. i think you wrote that in really well, how minho's always trying so hard and key knows when something stops him from being himself. and they hold hands! ;~; ah anon ♥
Re: shinee, minkey, #6 (2/2)
anonymous
June 7 2011, 08:29:13 UTC
thank you so much anon! ♥
and yeah, they're such different people ide. thank you so much, a problem of mine was if i wrote their relationship all wrong and yeah. ♥ ;~; ilu anon, tysm. (':
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"Maybe I should become a spokesman for all the victims of car crashes." Sungyeol with a bright smile as he looks down at the wreck of his legs. "After all, there's not much else I can do with my voice."
Myungsoo kind of wants to punch him. Sungjong frowns. "I think you're supposed to say spokesperson. Don't be sexist, hyung ( ... )
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he doesn't want to look at Sungyeol, sitting shirtless on the bed and covered in marks that Myungsoo didn't put there SOBS actually a lot of these lines got me going and i'm kind of swallowing a lump in my throat right now. i love how it's... agitated, in a way, it makes it more heartbreaking for me ):
UGH and their optimism i just can't ;~;
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..is it bad if I say I'm glad you feel sad? ): I really tried for emotional, so I'm glad you feel like it came across :) even if it is all angsty and everything ):
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sungyeol still joking around during a time like that is kind of heartbreaking and ideky.
but either way, i really like this anon ♥ even if it was angsty
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thank you! I'm glad you liked it, even if it's saaad ):
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i just think they have so much to offer as a pairing! i mean, not gonna lie, most of the time when someone says jongho i think U S T but yeah lol otp time!! ok! they can be really sweet sometimes. i love the way jonghyun kind of curls into minho's chest when they hug ;~;
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this is so sweet. idk i feel like minkey is the most confused pairing in shinee lmao, i love how despite being the same age they're the ones that probably understand each other the least. i think you wrote that in really well, how minho's always trying so hard and key knows when something stops him from being himself. and they hold hands! ;~; ah anon ♥
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and yeah, they're such different people ide. thank you so much, a problem of mine was if i wrote their relationship all wrong and yeah. ♥ ;~; ilu anon, tysm. (':
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