bigbang gd/top prompt 5 (part 1)
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:09:02 UTC
It would be wonderful if we had some kind of whirlwind, dramatic romance, the sort that Shakespeare wrote about, or the ones that fuelled the epics. Something that would make people gasp in surprise, or cause them to be jealous that something so vast and tragic and desperate is only available to a few
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Re: bigbang gd/top prompt 5 (part 2)
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:09:35 UTC
Of course it wasn't enough though - at least eventually it wasn't. I don't know when I started feeling like I wanted more (again, it was probably some gradual change) but that's how it turned out. I didn't tell you because you were totally content, and I thought you were really sweet like that, so I just left it and hoped silently that something exciting would come along and liven things up a bit
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Re: bigbang gd/top prompt 5 (part 2)
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:29:01 UTC
who are you anon and would you like my soul? or cookies? or sex?
god, this is good. this is first-person done right. you clearly know your gtop because this is littered with references to their history. you also know them because this is very very them because seunghyun is steady and jiyong is not, because seunghyun likes peace and quiet and jiyong does not and because jiyong would prize normal above all else because he doesn't know what normal really is.
and that bit about sex in public takes this from good to great.
Re: bigbang gd/top prompt 5 (part 2)
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:32:56 UTC
i'm a mysterious gtop provider. but all 3 would be nice if you're offering!
i've never done first-person before so it was a bit like diving in at the deep end. i wish i could say something sensible back but you made me feel all warm and fuzzy, so thank you. public sex seems like the most un-top-like thing to do, so it was like a milestone for gd
b1a4, jinyoung/dongwoo, prompt 5
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:13:33 UTC
"Why do you do this?" It was late, a lone beam of moonlight creeping across the floor of Dongwoo's bedroom floor. It fell just short of the bed, leaving them bathed in shadow. "One day someone's going to find out
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Re: b1a4, jinyoung/dongwoo, prompt 5
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:33:32 UTC
...I am so excited please please please finish this ahhhhhhhh. and this sounds so interesting too. also i always need more b1a4 fic so. um. please finish?
big bang, teen top; gd/l.joe; [4]
anonymous
June 19 2011, 23:15:05 UTC
Jiyong's history was littered with things fairytales were made of, girls like evil witches and men like bad kings, moats that were too deep to swim out of and demons that jumped out at him at night. It was like some lasting curse he couldn't escape, and a few times he had considered picking up a book, maybe finding some magical chant that would give him the chance to have some sort of satisfaction rather than the numerous texts and callous partings.
It would have been better if that was the end, but no, the story wasn't over, and each wound was like the curtain drop that signalled an intermission rather than the end, and so he was forced to start again, brandishing what goodwill he had left in the hopes that maybe he wasn't the prince but the princess and someone would rescue him instead
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god, this is good. this is first-person done right. you clearly know your gtop because this is littered with references to their history. you also know them because this is very very them because seunghyun is steady and jiyong is not, because seunghyun likes peace and quiet and jiyong does not and because jiyong would prize normal above all else because he doesn't know what normal really is.
and that bit about sex in public takes this from good to great.
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i've never done first-person before so it was a bit like diving in at the deep end. i wish i could say something sensible back but you made me feel all warm and fuzzy, so thank you. public sex seems like the most un-top-like thing to do, so it was like a milestone for gd
thanks so much!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
on one hand.
on the other it's all ;w; JINYOUNG WHAT WERE YOU DOING AND WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN LYING ABOUT.
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sob.
that did not happen. :|
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i saw nothing :3 ♥
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and damn i ship them so much 8( we need to know more about their japan trip!
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i'm working on the japan trip now :D
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It would have been better if that was the end, but no, the story wasn't over, and each wound was like the curtain drop that signalled an intermission rather than the end, and so he was forced to start again, brandishing what goodwill he had left in the hopes that maybe he wasn't the prince but the princess and someone would rescue him instead ( ... )
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