This, continued. http://kpopficwank.livejournal.com/399.html?thread=1693327#t1693327
anonymous
March 23 2010, 06:43:52 UTC
From the last challenge. It's not really edited because I'm tired and about to go to bed. But here it is, anyway.
The most alarming crashes and clatters have been coming from Jiyong's room for at least half an hour. Youngbae gets up with a sigh, because no one else is moving to talk to their leader. He carefully opens the door just in time to see Jiyong finally slip the window screen from its track, but he pinches his fingers between the metal frame and the track. He pulls back quickly, and before Youngbae can do or say anything, the screen is probably halfway to the ground
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Re: This, continued. http://kpopficwank.livejournal.com/399.html?thread=1693327#t1693327
anonymous
March 23 2010, 06:53:16 UTC
i like this a lot anon! i really enjoy how it's almost a satire on typical ~tormented gd~ and mild-mannered mama!bae is really cute and incredibly in character. plus the image of them staring down the apartment window at the screen is hilarious ♥
The most alarming crashes and clatters have been coming from Jiyong's room for at least half an hour. Youngbae gets up with a sigh, because no one else is moving to talk to their leader. He carefully opens the door just in time to see Jiyong finally slip the window screen from its track, but he pinches his fingers between the metal frame and the track. He pulls back quickly, and before Youngbae can do or say anything, the screen is probably halfway to the ground ( ... )
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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