ok's anatomy.
anonymous
March 25 2010, 06:39:44 UTC
aka what happens when you watch too much grey's.
When Taecyeon is 28, and Junsu goes to the army, and the rest of them are out of contract because JYPE finally files for bankruptcy, he goes back to America and takes the three steps of his medical licensing examinations
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Re: ok's anatomy.
anonymous
March 25 2010, 06:41:49 UTC
He settles in pretty quickly. His apartment is nice, and it looks out on the bay where he can see the fishing boats and the docked ships in the marina. In the morning he gets up early and goes for a run, the salty breeze filling him in and waking him up for the long day ahead.
He likes his coworkers. They’re all stressed out and competing with each other most of the time (an atmosphere Taecyeon is used to) but they’re forced to make friends anyway because people would rather have trust in each other instead of enemies.
Taecyeon doesn’t view his job as some sort of competition to get to the top; he lived that way for 11 years in Korea and it tired him out. So he competes with himself, and is patient with everyone else. His superiors like that attitude, except for maybe Dr. Yang, one of the attending physicians who views him as a lazy gnat and isn’t shy about telling him so
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Re: ok's anatomy.
anonymous
March 25 2010, 06:54:05 UTC
i really like the idea, but this sorta reads like a monotonous biography. idk, the tone seems too calm and patient much like taec's character here, but idk, i'm probably just a picky bitch who doesn't know what she's talking about. D:
also, shepherd's line of 'seattle is a great place to fall in love' is a little lolworthy. i can't imagine him saying that for some reason. i do like this last line: Nothing amuses Dr. Grey more than the music videos, and when she asks him why there are seven people in the first video and then suddenly only six in the next few, she look at Taecyeon’s face, and doesn’t ask him again.
excuse me for gushing all over this. it's late ;_;
anonymous
March 25 2010, 07:00:00 UTC
!!!!!! oh my god anon oh my god oh my GOD. you've managed to write the world of grey's so well it's amazing. sobs i am so blown away by this, and by how observant you seem and how effortless the writing flows, and i wont be surprised if by the ending you'll have managed to make me cry like every single one of the episodes do ;___; (and lol forever at christina's reactions, lmao gnat oh MY GODDD) ♥
Re: excuse me for gushing all over this. it's late ;_;
anonymous
March 25 2010, 07:21:51 UTC
ajdggdfzfG thank you! i thought a lot of things would seem out of place because i'm not a regular grey's but thanks for this comment i'm a little more reassured now. :D
Re: ok's anatomy.
anonymous
March 25 2010, 06:42:49 UTC
i really like this, anon! i think the last part the "seattle is a big city and there are probably lots of hospitals" line doesn't need to be italicized? i think that sheperd asking if taec's seeing someone and the "great place for falling in love" are kind of ...really personal/corny, but i can't remember what sheperd's character is like tbh. :|
Re: ok's anatomy.
anonymous
March 25 2010, 06:45:12 UTC
He spends his days mostly in the hospital and his apartment, and on his days off likes walking around the city, and makes plans to someday go hiking. He talks to his parents on the weekend, promises Jihyen he’ll be there for the wedding, and when he is feeling brave and tipsy, calls Seoul
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When Taecyeon is 28, and Junsu goes to the army, and the rest of them are out of contract because JYPE finally files for bankruptcy, he goes back to America and takes the three steps of his medical licensing examinations ( ... )
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He settles in pretty quickly. His apartment is nice, and it looks out on the bay where he can see the fishing boats and the docked ships in the marina. In the morning he gets up early and goes for a run, the salty breeze filling him in and waking him up for the long day ahead.
He likes his coworkers. They’re all stressed out and competing with each other most of the time (an atmosphere Taecyeon is used to) but they’re forced to make friends anyway because people would rather have trust in each other instead of enemies.
Taecyeon doesn’t view his job as some sort of competition to get to the top; he lived that way for 11 years in Korea and it tired him out. So he competes with himself, and is patient with everyone else. His superiors like that attitude, except for maybe Dr. Yang, one of the attending physicians who views him as a lazy gnat and isn’t shy about telling him so ( ... )
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also, shepherd's line of 'seattle is a great place to fall in love' is a little lolworthy. i can't imagine him saying that for some reason. i do like this last line: Nothing amuses Dr. Grey more than the music videos, and when she asks him why there are seven people in the first video and then suddenly only six in the next few, she look at Taecyeon’s face, and doesn’t ask him again.
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anyway, thanks for the suggestion! i think i'll have to find a way of squeezing in the back story without making it seem like a biography.
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but i'm excited for this!
i hope that you continue, anon.
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He spends his days mostly in the hospital and his apartment, and on his days off likes walking around the city, and makes plans to someday go hiking. He talks to his parents on the weekend, promises Jihyen he’ll be there for the wedding, and when he is feeling brave and tipsy, calls Seoul ( ... )
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but rn? i adore it. will this be taecjay? because if it will be, it'll be so great omg.
I AM EXCITED, ANON.
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i hope you write more, anon! ♥
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i'm extra incoherent at this hour, please excuse me.
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