inbox #10

[kpopv]

inbox #10
1. exo/shinee, taemin/kai, president and vice president of the high school anime club, any rating
2. yge/2ne1, hayi/minji, hayi can't dance, minji teaches her how, any rating
3. big bang, gd/top, they enlist at the same time and go through boot camp together, any rating
4. 2ne1, cl/any, hs au, cl is a varsity sports hotshot, any rating
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[corpuscallos_m]

okay here is my belated response to prompt #2. ugh it was really long but I cut a lot of it out because it just kept going on and on and I would have never finished it. I didn't even get to the teaching part. sorry. :( maybe someday I'll put a proper ending to this fic.

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“No, no, that's no good,” the choreographer says for the umpteenth time that afternoon. Once again, he's stopping the dancers and trying to get Hayi to correct her posture.

Really, she's trying. Really, really trying. They've been practicing this dance for three hours now. Her bangs are sticking to her face from the sweat and her legs ache from the constant dancing

[corpuscallos_m]

As she walks by, Hayi sneaks a glance at the frosted glass of the door. There's only one person inside. At least from what she can tell. Hayi stops, wondering who it could be. Who would voluntarily be here at this hour? Especially from a group such as 2NE1

[corpuscallos_m]

She's an hour and a half early for practice today. She double checked her schedule and still read the time wrong. Today is Thrusday, not Friday

[corpuscallos_m]

Hayi doesn't try to over-think it and quickly sits next to Minji, secretly hoping that Bom isn't somehow disappointed

[corpuscallos_m]

Suddenly the choreographer is counting down too fast and Hayi stumbles on the first step. The music cuts out almost immediately.

“Hayi“I know, I know, I'm sorry,” Hayi says with a bow. She straightens up quickly, fixing her stray hairs yet again. “Please let me try again

[corpuscallos_m]

The music stops and Hayi can't help but let out an amazed sound. “Sunbaenim, that was amazing!” she says.

Minji turns around, smiling. “You can just call me 'unnie,' y'know,” she says with a giggle.

“Okay, unnie,” Hayi says softly, blushing as she's unable to hide the giddy feeling it gives her to say.

“Now I want you to try again. But move like how I just did,” Minji says as she backs off the dance floor.

“But I--.”

Minji turns back around, places her hands on Hayi's shoulders, and looks into her eyes as she says, “Don't think, just feel it. You can do it.”

Hayi feels a strange twinge in her chest at those words.

'You can do itMinji's eyes nor her touch isn't helping the feeling go away. Hayi forces her eyes to the floor

[gdgdbaby]

AHHHHH clutches my face ;~; this was so cute!!! i rly like how awkward and fumbling hayi is throughout this, thrown off-kilter by this one thing that she really can't do but that she needs to try to bc it's part of her stages, that's exactly how i imagined it *__* and self-assured talented minji!!! i love this line: Minji is like a skilled painter when Hayi is merely a kid with a coloring book who hasn't even mastered staying inside the lines yet. and the bom cameo :') this was so nice and i'm sad that you cut stuff out bc i would've loved to read more :3 i hope you end up writing some sort of add-on/continuation as well :D thank you so much for writing this for me ;~; ♥ there needs to be more hayi fic in the world huhu