FIC: Harry Potter and the Secret of Godric's Hollow

Nov 01, 2006 03:56

Title: Harry Potter and the Secret of Godric's Hollow
Author: krabapple
Rating: PG, for a wee bit of foul language
Pairing: Gen (Harry, Ron, Hermione, Remus Lupin), with canonical James/Lily
Disclaimer: I own nothing you might recognize.
Summary: The Dursleys have new neighbors on Privet Drive who look very familiar to Harry.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
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harry potter, gen, fic

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lyras November 1 2006, 09:45:02 UTC
Oh, excellent! A really nice read, with lots of emotion behind it, but no overload.

I noticed the Little Whining typo, too, but I have to say, it's a brilliant typoe :).

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krabapple December 14 2006, 03:49:25 UTC
Thank you for the feedback! It was lovely!

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lls_mutant November 1 2006, 15:08:45 UTC
Oh, this was lovely! Especially that vivid ending. It's a nice AU where Dumbledore is wrong, but not evil, and I really feel for James and Lily and Harry. Love Ron in this, too, especially the way he bumbles, but still understands Harry better than Hermione does. (Ron and Harry's friendship is one of my favorite things about the books.)

Although I'd really, really hate to see James's face when he learned about Sirius. ::hugs James::

Lovely work!

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krabapple December 14 2006, 03:51:07 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the story -- it was interesting to write. And I think you're right -- Dumbledore isn't evil, but he was wrong; he makes mistakes, I suppose. I love that scene with Harry and Ron, too, so I'm glad it worked for you. I thought someone needed to ask Harry how he felt, and that Harry needed to talk about it, and that that someone would naturally be Ron. :)

Poor, poor James.

Thanks again!

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amberlynne November 4 2006, 01:15:51 UTC
Awww. I love the idea of Harry getting his parents back. *sniff* That was just lovely. :)

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krabapple December 14 2006, 03:51:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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sambethe November 4 2006, 19:53:17 UTC
*sniff* Lovely.

I really enjoyed how you balanced the dynamics of the Trio - Hermione's logic and Ron's ability to understand and just be there for Harry were especially well done. I think it brought out nicely how Harry relies on them for different things.

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krabapple December 14 2006, 03:51:52 UTC
Thank you for the lovely feedback!

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Fic: Harry Potter and the Secret of Godric's Hollow secondsilk November 21 2006, 06:57:53 UTC
Lovely piece.
Excellent characterisation all round, from the neighbourhood gossip at the beginning through the Lily going to see Petunia (oh, how that conversation went!).
Ron was wonderful. Hermione, too, but Ron getting the butterbeer.
And Remus. I read so much Marauder-fic, that seeing him like this through Harry's eyes again was a really nice thing.

Banana's aren't just fruit in Australia at the moment - they cost $9 a kilo, or almost $2 each, so I thought, 'oh, bananas when Harry was buying them. :-)

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Re: Fic: Harry Potter and the Secret of Godric's Hollow krabapple December 14 2006, 03:52:20 UTC
Hee. I hope you get some bananas soon!

And thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I appreciate it!

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