FIC: Unspoken

Jan 20, 2008 23:50

Title: Unspoken
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: PG
Summary: Whatever this is, they don't talk about it.
Disclaimer: I own nothing you might recognize.
Feedback: Always appreciated.
Author's Notes/Warnings: Spoilers through Season Four's Miller's Crossing. I'm not sure this is technically an episode tag, but ( Read more... )

john/rodney, sga, episode tag, fic

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amberlynne January 21 2008, 06:49:07 UTC
Oh, John. I stole musesfool's laptop just so I could read this RIGHT NOW and it was totally worth it. I love how you threaded John's tension through the whole thing and his sense of being sort of apart from it all. And in the end, Rodney just gets it and oh. So lovely. Wonderful. :)

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krabapple March 8 2008, 02:43:30 UTC
Oh my GOD, I am SO BAD at replying to feedback, but I am SO SO SO HAPPY you liked it. And that Vic was so generous with her computer! :)

*MWAH*

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saturn92103 January 21 2008, 11:58:17 UTC
This was just lovely. That ep is just calling for as much fic as possible.

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krabapple March 8 2008, 02:44:36 UTC
Thank you so much, my dear! I know it took me forever to reply to this feedback, but it was awesome and just looking at it makes me all warm and fuzzy all over again. So thank you!

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sheafrotherdon January 21 2008, 14:47:14 UTC
Oh, that's so beautiful! What a great hook to pull us through the story - SO great. BOYS!

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sheafrotherdon January 21 2008, 18:19:18 UTC
By the way, duck, you should be cross-posting these gems - sga_noticeboard and mckay_sheppard and for this one, sga_episodefic for sure ♥

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krabapple March 8 2008, 02:46:50 UTC
Awww, thank you for the encouragement! Now that spring break is here and I might have two spare minutes to rub together, I might just get on that. :) *hugs*

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krabapple March 8 2008, 02:45:45 UTC
I know I completely suck at replying to feedback, but I finally am, and I just wanted to say how much I appreciate your lovely comment! *squeezes you tight*

Thank you!

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anitac588 January 21 2008, 15:01:01 UTC
Great story, fits perfectly with the episode and explains the cut scenes very well, ;-).

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krabapple March 8 2008, 02:48:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your lovely feedback, but I really do appreciate it. Thanks again!

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bironic January 21 2008, 15:28:09 UTC
This is great. I think it really captures the frustration and desperation John was struggling with in that episode, and the last scene is just lovely, when John breaks and Rodney gets it. The theme you wove through of John's mouth and smiles was gorgeous.

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krabapple March 8 2008, 02:49:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply to your lovely feedback, but I really do appreciate it. Your comments were so thoughtful. Thanks again!

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