FIC: Cracks

[krabapple]

Title: Cracks
Fandom: Doctor Who 2005
Pairing: 11/Rose, 11/River (implied future), Amy/Rory
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Through 6X07, A Good Man Goes to War
Summary: These can't be the only notes in the world, there's got to be other notes some place, in some dimension, between the cracks on the piano keys. -- Marvin Gaye. Cracks appear in Rose's world.

Comments

[wildestranger]

This is beautiful and fascinating. I very much enjoyed your characterisation.

[krabapple]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the comment!

[leiascully]

I loved it! I admire your ability to write plot, and I love that you worked in Rose and River both in a way that was realistic. After all, the Doctor's loved a lot of people, hasn't he? It was very nicely written as well, lots of subdued emotion.

And see, I always meant to read it, so thank you for the reminder. ♥

[krabapple]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind and thoughtful feedback. *hugs*

[sahiya]

This is brilliant - very bittersweet, but also beautiful. I loved your Rose here, and her relationship with River.

[krabapple]

Thank you! I really appreciate the thoughtful feedback!

[egalitarianmuse]

I think this story is brilliant. I loved that you managed to make it clear that the Doctor could care about two different women in his life and have both be true love while not making the women themselves enemies. I didn't even know I was sucker for Rose and River friendship until right now. This is really great.

[krabapple]

Oh, thank you so much! I appreciate the thoughtful feedback, and I agree -- I would love to see more of Rose and River being friends and working together!

Thanks again!

[anathema1980]

thank you! i love when they work together like that
poor handy, tho...