Just another day
Prompt: Setting the Mood
Community: your_scribbles
Title: In the darkness of my mind
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Dark
Authors Notes: This isn't entirely based on me. It's related to my late post about setting. Since it seemed like the character was kind of afraid of going back to her room, I decided to work with that. That, and I'm listening to a pretty ( Read more... )
Community: your_scribbles
Title: In the darkness of my mind
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Dark
Authors Notes: This isn't entirely based on me. It's related to my late post about setting. Since it seemed like the character was kind of afraid of going back to her room, I decided to work with that. That, and I'm listening to a pretty ( Read more... )
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I feel like you were going for a heavy atmosphere, but I think the repetition of the word heavy is a little bit too much, near the end. Do you know what I mean?
But I like it a lot, the feeling is definitely there. Thanks for filling the prompt!
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I'm with Writing2death. Maybe if you would have replace the word "heavy" with another word? But I have to say....I love, adore even, the repeat of the word heavy at the end. Ties it all together, sums it up.
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