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[kraziekortney7]

Which one of these songs for my poetry alive is better??

And we can run, from the backdrop of these gears and scalpels
At every hour goes the tick-tock bang of monitors as
They stared us down when met in the emergency room
And in our beds, I could hear you breathe with help from cold machines

Every hour, on the hour, they drew blood

Well I felt I

Comments

[punk_prnzez]

i like number 2 better. :D

*kellster* <3

[ragingsexdemon]

me3!!!!!!! its koool!
~*~NiK~*~

[kraziekortney7]

alriight that one it is :)