Comments | krazykat_neko: Fic: "Oversleeping"; Robert/Kristen

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Fic: "Oversleeping"; Robert/Kristen

Sep 23, 2008 13:27

"Oversleeping"
RPF. Robert Pattinson/Kristen Stewart. NC-17. 1,597 words.Summary: Why Rob was late to the Cosmo Girl shoot ( Read more... )

robert/kristen, fanfic

Comments 61

writingvixen September 23 2008, 05:53:25 UTC

He forces himself to walk out the door without looking back, otherwise he might never leave. He definitely didn’t want to.

That line was coo worthy. ♥

I could definitely tell this was a different style, it read as such. And it's so much fun to experiment. But honestly Kat, this is JUST as good as your others.

The moments you write them feel so real that I honestly feel like I'm climbing the stairs to their apartment and watching them through the open door. I can SEE them just being them. And that's talent.

Great job, again.:)

krazykat_neko September 24 2008, 00:02:07 UTC

Hee. It is fun to experiment! Especially since I don't really know what my 'style' is exactly yet.

The moments you write them feel so real that I honestly feel like I'm climbing the stairs to their apartment and watching them through the open door. I can SEE them just being them. And that's talent.

That's a slightly creepy mental image but a HUGE compliment. I love conveying their intimacy, that's what I reach for when I write moments like this. Thank you! ♥

searchtheskies September 23 2008, 05:54:09 UTC

GAH I LOVE IT. Hot, cute, playful. Also, I LOLed IRL at this:

“Even with his martial arts bullshit, Taylor couldn’t hurt a fly if he wanted to.”

Well played.

krazykat_neko September 24 2008, 00:09:36 UTC

Hee. I couldn't resist taking a jab at Taycob! =D

allisfair September 23 2008, 06:44:59 UTC

you make is sound so real!! good job bb! i love rob/kristen ff...much better than edward/bella ff...im off to read more of yours! =)

krazykat_neko September 24 2008, 00:14:00 UTC

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the others. :D

afrodeesyack September 23 2008, 06:52:12 UTC

No matter what style you write, the finished product will always come out amazing. That's the mark of a good writer. And you, my dear, ARE one. =)

[i]“Kellan and Taylor are going to kill you,” she says, amusement in her voice, laced with tiredness.

He snorts. “Even with his martial arts bullshit, Taylor couldn’t hurt a fly if he wanted to.”

“I bet he was there right on the dot.”

“Well, the kid isn’t getting laid,” he twists slightly, kisses her. She pushes him off.[/i]

That made me spit out my water! Brilliant.

krazykat_neko September 24 2008, 00:19:37 UTC

Oh. *blushes* Thank you! That means a lot. I mean, I love writing and it means the world to me that people actually enjoy reading what I write. Thank you again. ♥

anonymous September 23 2008, 07:00:09 UTC

Hi! I'm commenting as anonymous because, well, you know, this all equals hell! Hehehe. I've never commented on your stuff before but I've read all of your R/K fics and I adore them. So why am I finally commenting? 'Cause I'm starting to feel guilty for appreciating your work but never letting you know. What really got to me in this fic, what I really adored and let me feel their love for each other was the part where he's getting dressed and she helps him with his buttons. Everything from that part and on was absolute brilliance. You can really feel the love and trust ( ... )

krazykat_neko September 24 2008, 03:24:46 UTC

Thank you so so much for the comment. It's really made my day and I'm so glad you like my stuff. There's really nothing better than knowing other people enjoy the stuff I write. ♥ Oh and I completely understand why you'd prefer to stay anonymous, I thank you for taking the time to leave such a long and thorough comment. =D