Yay for new writers. We should form a union or something. "Beginners R Us."
Glad you posted this. It's a great start and I'd like to see the rest. As soon as possible. I don't like cliffhangers...*grin*.
You've made so many improvements since I saw it last night - wow, what a difference that made. Yay!
My favorite line has got to be Okay, fuck sensitive. That is sooo Ray that it's not even funny. And I loved Ray and Fraser back-and-forthing like little kids.
Good job and keep going.
Just a note - there's a typo toward the end "Fraser stood up abrublty." - should be abruptly.
Yay, and welcome to DS! And, ooh, an interesting idea, having Fraser be insecure like this, and not one I think I've seen explored before. I can totally imagine his dates being bored by his more esoteric flights of fancy. I probably would be. Heh! *pets him*
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Glad you posted this. It's a great start and I'd like to see the rest. As soon as possible. I don't like cliffhangers...*grin*.
You've made so many improvements since I saw it last night - wow, what a difference that made. Yay!
My favorite line has got to be Okay, fuck sensitive. That is sooo Ray that it's not even funny. And I loved Ray and Fraser back-and-forthing like little kids.
Good job and keep going.
Just a note - there's a typo toward the end "Fraser stood up abrublty." - should be abruptly.
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*anticipates more* :-)
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