These are just some poems I write in random moments of depression... feel free to critique or whatever, there just here for the reading
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Never have I EVER seen you depressed. I don't believe you when you say you get depressed. So there. :P
Fun poems. I like your style. cause most people use the same style, sixteen line free verse. *CoughthatswhatIuse...* Only one rhythm issue that I could find in the first poem, but hey, we can't all be perfect.
I can get depressed, just like everyone else x3 I'm just better at dealing with it, or hiding it, or something...
Yeah, I like experimenting with styles... the first three poems are supposed to seem like two seperate thoughts/speakers/whatever... rhythem in the first one? Yeah, I guess it has it's own weird pulse in my head... I'll get around to changing the lines to make it fit eventually...
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Fun poems. I like your style. cause most people use the same style, sixteen line free verse. *CoughthatswhatIuse...* Only one rhythm issue that I could find in the first poem, but hey, we can't all be perfect.
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Yeah, I like experimenting with styles... the first three poems are supposed to seem like two seperate thoughts/speakers/whatever... rhythem in the first one? Yeah, I guess it has it's own weird pulse in my head... I'll get around to changing the lines to make it fit eventually...
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