Comments | krdzr: Bow Tie

krdzr

Bow Tie

Dec 28, 2009 17:22

*Hides under a rock*

Comments? … Or would you rather brick me?

pairing: nichkhun/wooyoung, genre: angst

Comments 14

love_khunyoung December 28 2009, 11:39:46 UTC

Oh wow.. this is a really good angst of Khunyoung.

U makes me feel so bad for Khun.
The story ends up perfectly with your title.. should've, could've, would've..

Such a sad twist u have here, but I love it.. impressive writing. ^^

I hope to see your next Khunyoung fic very soon, hope it would be a bit longer next time. Thanks for sharing.

krdzr December 28 2009, 19:43:02 UTC

thank you ^^
i'll try to make them longer. Lol
i can never seem to do that.
I tend to go straight to the point but i shall do my best :)

chalcogens December 28 2009, 12:15:41 UTC

ohmybuck :((

krdzr December 28 2009, 19:44:14 UTC

*pats your head*

sorry to your buck :(

Thanks for reading, dude ^^

nhijumma December 29 2009, 19:06:09 UTC

I liked it. :) Any kind of khunyoung, despite this being angst, is still khunyoung and I cannot pass up an opportunity to read potentially good ones. This is REAL good. :))

I love how the wordings are very simple and bare. And especially the last part, ARGH. Made me wanna cry. BUT, I watched too much Khunyoung moments in SBS Gayo daejun a while ago, so I'm still too happy to do so. XDD

Please write more. :)
Nhixxie!

krdzr December 29 2009, 19:14:45 UTC

^^ thank you

lol. watched that too. practically died XD

and, yes, i plan on writing more ^^
hopefully happier ones. my past works are all angst driven.
(actually, i usually always am)

thanks again :3

rustyrabbit December 31 2009, 20:07:27 UTC

I didn't scroll down enough to see the last line so I flinched a little when I saw the sentence, "Congratulations Woo."

Unexpected but nice.

Perhaps this could be further developed?
I kinda like the idea.
Ah~
I feel like listening to 'Wedding Dress' now...
=S

krdzr January 2 2010, 02:34:06 UTC

ohhh...
thanks ^^

hmmm...
i did have an idea but then i still need to develope it.
and i still need a song to keep me going on my writing.
might take me time since i'm planning on working on another one.

cocobaby347 April 6 2010, 07:14:35 UTC

*Finds bricks* I will give you five seconds or explain yourself.

How could you do this I-Damn. Now I'm all sad T.T

Beautiful angst though, so I can't be completely upset, but really. Five seconds.

krdzr April 6 2010, 13:31:01 UTC

i exceeded your five seconds...
There was a brownout...
my explanation...
It wasn't suppose to end like this. i was supposed to make a continuation but then i never got the plot right...
Sorry :(

cocobaby347 April 7 2010, 00:41:50 UTC

Okay...I accept your explanation :)

Even though it made me wanna cry, It was really good, can't wait till you write something else! <33333

krdzr April 7 2010, 12:56:58 UTC

here's a heads up.
I'm writing right now ^^

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