Excessive

[krickitat]

So after all this time I finally have a new story

Excessive
Author: krickitatRating:M

Comments

[me_ninjakitty]

i think i need a cold shower...

[krickitat]

Can i join you? and lets go ahead and turn the temp up a couple notches

[me_ninjakitty]

oooooo *runs out in a towel*

i'm dying for the next chapter now.

[leafy_girl]

Whoa, kitchen sex... rawr.
:)

[krickitat]

Trust me it was as enjoyable to write as it was to read

and i did alot more work this time...most of my stuff i dont try to go back and do second and third edits for weeks but this time i went ahead and did them since it was so short...and well you can see the difference