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Sep 29, 2003 18:09

seagull and ocean
womb, blue-walled wonder,
sea glass and salted

hair coiling
in the wet
palm like a net of

threads washing, stringing
the sound scrape, sand
in a wound like a mouth,
pulsing

warm breath like heart
blood

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just what i needed. dirrty_rockstar September 30 2003, 08:25:47 UTC
really, it was. i needed that.

i was all about to post another excerpt from the horribly translated book, but that would have just been wrong on the same day as you posted this.

as usual, it's perfect. it made me feel aware. of what, i'm not sure. i want more! now now now!

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Re: just what i needed. kriminologie October 3 2003, 21:58:05 UTC
Man, I was just screwing around, but to write something, ANYTHING, felt like magic!

God I love that ass-terrible book.

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Re: just what i needed. dirrty_rockstar October 4 2003, 02:27:21 UTC
good, 'cause i'm gonna put another horrible passage up tomorrow. lol

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