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Nov 27, 2003 23:58

movement that mouths
at the plane of your breastbone
shuddering hair
shaking

earthquake of your jaw

tremor and slide

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juxtaposeur November 28 2003, 08:57:20 UTC
it's hard to describe how i react when i read a new poem of yours, but i guess i would say it is an internal emotional reaction on par with the reaction i give when opening up a personal library kit.

eee! it's beautiful!

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kriminologie November 28 2003, 11:49:35 UTC
That personal library kit is RADASS! My writing, not quite so spectacular! At least not so spectacular spectacular as non-circulating stickers!

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juxtaposeur November 28 2003, 13:00:42 UTC
it is too spectacular spectacular!!

but yeah, those non-circulating stickers are pretty radass.

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