Na Po Wri Mo #6: Plus 700

[krinndnz]

Insects! Musk-phermones! Transformation! Mind control! All in SPECTACULAR SOMAVISION, in full color and advanced supra-proto-Varnasound as terrifying invaders descend from the sky!

Hear! the buzzing of their wings,
See! their gleaming compound eyes,
Smell! the deadly phermones that turn Earthlings against one another,
Feel! the overwhelming

Comments

[momentrabbit]

I'm makimg this post on a handheld, so it won't be as polished or long as if I had a keyboard or time. But! I am digging your porn for many reasons, one of which is that you're writing 'seed porn' - yes it's kinky, but it's like the 'innocent' commercials and novels and tv shows and movies that put the seeds of xenophillia into us of a certain age - rather than strokefic that mashes a button (which you can also do and which you do /achingly/ well when you do), your recent work touches on something arousing and wanders in interesting directions, allowing new facets of smut to filter in from the periphery.

Bravo. Please continue. n.n

[krinndnz]

Hey, thank you! I'm happy that it sparked those thoughts in you. The chunks of this story that are still in my head instead of set down in "print" are definitely in that "wander around and look for interesting narrative toys" mold. Cheers.

[relee]

I liked it! ^.^

[krinndnz]

Thank you, squirrel.

[relee]

Keep writing! *cracks the whip!*

[paka]

Made me think of the insect shamans from "Shadowrun."

[krinndnz]

Oh, hey, wow, you're right! I loved that theme in there.

[lhexa]

I think present tense was a poor choice for such a descriptive beginning -- that tense seems best for giving a sense of urgency, a sense of having to focus on the present. And it may be that too little happens for you to be so coy with information.

Interesting again, though.