Lay where you're laying, don't make a sound

[krisd81]

Title: Lay where you're laying, don't make a sound (from KoL's "Sex on Fire")
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: PG-15
Word count: 1 800
Warning: Underaged boys (13 and 17)
Summary: On a lazy summer day boys get bored. Things happen.
Beta: Grammar nazi par excellence maichan808 (her: LOL, spelling fail me: >:( )
For: Cheerleader extraordinaire

Comments

NO!!

[antarshakes]

you can't leave me hanging here!! NOOOOOOOOO! *sound dies*

I will give sexual favors in order for your muse to sex you up and continue this. Because I already love the atmosphere and the secrecy and the age diff and the sweetness and the other stuffness and stuff and please don't let me rant of like this or maybe do or just stop reading or don't I don't know what to do. are you annoyed yet? No? How about now? So you promising a follow-up or should I pester you some more? No? Okay fair enough.

p.s.
Forgive me hahahah

Re: NO!!

[krisd81]

Ahahahhahhhahaa! *clap*

This is incredible! Buuuuut no promises. If they feel like it, they'll come back. If they don't... well.

Thank you for reading and the, uh, enthusiasm.

[candygramme]

awww, poor baby!Jared, cut off at the moment of truth. That was very hot, my dear.

[krisd81]

Why thank you.

P.S. Baby!Jared agrees with you there. :P

[supernatangel67]

Awesome! I loved it.

[krisd81]

Thanks! :)

[dont_be_rabid]

gah! you can't leave it there! I'm joining in the begging - please please please please please please please please continue!

=)

you're writing is most excellent *two thumbs up*

[krisd81]

you can't leave it there!

I just did! Muahahaha!

LOL, sorry. Thank you for reading (not so much for the pressure :P).

[country_bee]

Would it be wrong to throw a temper tantrum like a 13 year old and demand beg for more?

If we do get more, I'm on the side of keeping them the same age, what makes this fic so awesome is that Jared is only 13, so very innocent, and so ready to be corrupted by Jensen. *dreamy sigh* ...yes it should be wrong...BUT IT'S NOT!

needless to say...LOVED IT! ♥

[krisd81]

what makes this fic so awesome is that Jared is only 13, so very innocent

Thank you for saying that. That was actually the main idea. I don't think I could ever make it go any further than this, really, because I want to keep Jared's innocence, you know?

[country_bee]

Completely understandable *nods*...but a bit more flirty moments wouldn't hurt anybody. *g*

[krisd81]

I never said there wouldn't be more of those... *scuffs toe*