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geraldinedragon February 21 2015, 19:32:22 UTC
SPOT.
I WILL READ THIS ASAP OMFG YOU DONT KNOW HOW THANKFUL I AM-

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I AM UNABLE TO EVEN I- geraldinedragon February 21 2015, 20:58:18 UTC
i am weeping my eyes out because oh my god this was too beautiful i just- wait let me just wipe my tears away and blow my nose.

i love, love love love the way you pinpoint exactly why they did the things they did, their emotions, their humaneness, their trail of thoughts, their feelings for each other and how it transformed both of them. i'm simply in love with the way you convey all these, how the words are just flowing so nicely; simple yet heartbreakingly honest. don't even let me start with how perfect this piece is, god i can write an ode for you.

and thank you for making an open ending to the story instead of the actual ending of the movie. i wept my soul out when i watched it, and i know i'll weep when i read this, but it's for an entirely different reason. the changes in the story's setting are negligible compared to the feels you made me feel when i read this. thank you for spending more than 30k on my humble piece of mind, i can never thank you enough. i promise i will send you an even longer response when i find out who ( ... )

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RE: I AM UNABLE TO EVEN I- khrysallis1106 May 5 2015, 14:21:28 UTC
Hello *___* You're really flattering me too much, haha. I really enjoyed working on your prompt so much, mostly because it gave me space to do plenty of character study and explore why each of them act in the way to do - which is something I haven't really done before, so thank you! I think I've mentioned that I had some difficulty in picking a prompt out of your list, but mostly because they all appeal to me, hurr.

And ♥ I'm glad you didn't mind the liberal changes I made while interpreting the prompt and altering it so that I'd deviate from the movie's actual plot. There were some things that I wasn't quite happy with the movie, and this gave me an opportunity to write an ending that I wanted to see, even if it's still rather tragic, rofl. (I'm sorry, that's the sadist in me speaking.)

♥have my love

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dcycurly February 22 2015, 02:23:31 UTC
This is very well written. I totally love it. I read it in one last night because I can't resist KrisHan.

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khrysallis1106 May 5 2015, 14:21:42 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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