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kristen0912

LoVe and Marriage (Logan/Veronica)

Jan 12, 2008 11:45

Title: LoVe and Marriage
Author: Kristen
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica
Word Count: 3423
Rating: PG-13
Summary: She looks up at him and smiles. "How does it end?" "Happily ever after, maybe?"
Spoilers: Futurefic, mentions of the pilot
Warnings: Some sensuality, nothing explicit
Disclaimer: I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or ( Read more... )

fanfiction, veronica mars

Comments 36

salingergurl January 13 2008, 16:11:13 UTC

Hey. Just read this and really liked it--I dig angsty LoVe. And this was beautifully written, delicious, angsty LoVe. :)

kristen0912 January 13 2008, 18:20:33 UTC

Thanks for commenting. I too enjoy angsty LoVe. The angst just rings true for them.

bfragrant January 13 2008, 16:30:07 UTC

That was really sad but nice. Really true to Veronica & Logan of Season 3. Angsty yet a little hopeful. I liked it :)

kristen0912 January 13 2008, 18:23:11 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I love your icon. "You are such a...catch."

bfragrant January 13 2008, 19:36:07 UTC

Thanks, I like it too. The credit goes to s0ulstorm icons :)

fickledame January 13 2008, 19:38:57 UTC

Ooh, this was brilliant. It made me cry. It's so intense and loving, yet jaded. I'm glad he came back, or I would *not* have been impressed with him. Spot on characterisation!

kristen0912 January 13 2008, 23:26:47 UTC

Thanks for the comment! FYI, your icon is awesome! I have like 6 icons (most of them VM related) and love to see great VM ones.

siobeehan January 13 2008, 22:56:41 UTC

That was gorgeous. While reading, I was actually preparing myself all the way through for a sad ending, but was so happy when it turned out to be a hopeful one instead.

The way you wrote the two of them in the future like this was totally believable, yet so sad that they weren't communicating and almost avoiding each other the way they were. But I loved all of Veronica's thoughts and the fact that she wanted it to work between them again, and Logan finally being able to accept her, in a way, again at the end.

I really loved it. Sorry for the ramble! :)

kristen0912 January 13 2008, 23:29:37 UTC

To tell you the truth, the first draft had V waking up alone in bed where Logan has already left for work, but it kind of broke my heart to write it like that. Therefore, hopeful ending.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

devylish January 14 2008, 01:38:19 UTC

seriously seriously well written

what a 'scene' of a life .... wow!

kristen0912 January 15 2008, 21:52:35 UTC

Thanks for the comment. Random side note: is your icon a Fraggle?

devylish January 16 2008, 00:52:29 UTC

yes... yes it was fraggle... let's see... who'd i snag it from??? tsaithefairy.... she had a selection of fraggle icons!!