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Same Old Lang Syne (Logan/Veronica)

Jan 26, 2008 04:25

Title: Same Old Lang Syne
Author: Kristen
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica
Word Count: 1799
Rating: PG
Summary: How did that Dan Fogelberg song go?
Spoilers: Futurefic, knowledge up to Look Who's Stalking
Warnings: Some innuendo and one swear word
Disclaimer: I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of Veronica Mars. No ( Read more... )

fanfiction, veronica mars

Comments 7

anifsemaj January 27 2008, 00:46:09 UTC

Aww... that was kinda sweet! I liked it.

kristen0912 January 28 2008, 21:42:23 UTC

Thanks for the comment!

Met my old lover in the library... peznarski January 27 2008, 19:10:12 UTC

Huh. It's the wrong thing to say, and will be taken in a way other than I intended it, but sometimes you surprise me with how tender you can be.

I think mostly, it's my own notions of what constitutes a "happy ending" and your oft given protestations that you loathe them. Semantics notwithstanding, this is neither an "ending", nor technically overtly "happy". In my emotional lexicon, however, it's as good as.

The beard and the dentistry were also surprising, but oddly enough, well in keeping with Logan's character. In some strange way, they really fit. You really know the psyches of the characters (at least, to my reckoning-- [don't suppose it's as good of a compliment to say "Hey! You think like me! Good job!"]), and your affection for these kids is terribly obvious. It's funny though, that your affection never truly affords them any definitive peace. I suppose one could speculate for quite some time as to what that means, but ultimately, despite any other conclusions one may arrive at, I think it's one of your greatest strengths ( ... )

Re: Met my old lover in the library... kristen0912 January 28 2008, 21:41:35 UTC

I don't know why you're surprised at my tenderness. Weren't YOU the one to call me a marshmallow? Or was that someone else? In another life? Anyone? Bueller?

I've decided my next fic will have more maniacal laughing and mustache twirling so's not to be misconstrued as "tender". This is what I get when I write sans angst.

Re: Met my old lover in the library... peznarski January 28 2008, 23:50:40 UTC

Wallace brought the whole "Marshmallow" thing to the table, I just seconded the motion.

I kinda thought the whole "tender" thing wouldn't be so appreciated, but I'm afraid I'm going to have to stand by it. I think most of your objection to the term derives from the fact that we kind of have slightly different ideas of what it actually implies. Truth be told, though, I'd probably be hard pressed to define my "tender" in any way that would take the ostensible sting out of its application towards your writing, so I'm not even going to try. Just know that, on my part, it was intended as a compliment and head out from there in any direction you'd care to.

By the by, I thought this one had a fairly reasonable amount of angst, but don't let that dissuade you from writing the other fic you've promised. You've piqued my interest, what with the maniacal laughter and moustache twirling. The thought of Snidely Whiplash visiting Neptune fills me with girlish glee.

inthevast June 15 2008, 06:08:01 UTC

Leave it to Logan Echolls to take the banter way out. They exchange smiles. The adrenaline pulses around them like they’re preparing for a match. Alright, Logan. I’ll play along.

OMG. The banter. I've missed them, this, SO MUCH. I love that she can't wait to figure out if he's married, etc. yet gives him nothing. I can only imagine his feelings during this exchange. Makes me all giddy. ;D

kristen0912 June 15 2008, 16:55:55 UTC

Thanks for the comment. I miss the banter as well! My hunt for a couple that banter like LoVe has come up fruitless. Thoughts?