Read it and weep people!

[kristendotcom]

*Exhales* Okay after much work and many, many rewrites I have finished my college essay. Yes I know its a day before its due, shut up. Its done and its pretty awesome.

I am seriously really proud of it and I am really grateful to my cousin who just sat with me for four hours straight. She really helped me make the essay more powerful and she said

Comments

[polarific]

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to the University of Florida.

[kristendotcom]

Yeah if only...lol

[unluckystar101]

that is an awesome essay
i wrote one about cancer as well
it isn't as good as this though

it looks like you spent a fair amount of time on it
and i think it will show
good job giambruno

[kristendotcom]

Thanks! Im sure your essay is kick ass. I only spent so much time on it because it took me so long to spit it out, lo.

[kristendotcom]

*lol

[jgthebowler]

Nice essay, don't think I spent more than 2 hours on mine though hehe.