Untitled Fic

[krystalblaze]

I didn't know where else to put this, and since I'm rather desperate for feedback, I thought I would post it here. This is the first part of an epic I'm working on, that is now just past novel length. I'm not going to post it except to those on LJ until I'm halfway done with the second book of the trilogy. I'm trying this new thing where I

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[dancinggoldfish]

Wasn't sure what fandom this was for (Star Wars given the whole Seperatist attackers?), but I really liked it. It was very powerful emotionally- made you feel like you wanted to cry until everything had been sucked dry- and the imagery was great. Nice work!