Week 4: “I don't skate to where the puck is. I skate to where the puck is going to be. "

Jan 04, 2017 19:58

“Excuse me, Miss?" A gentle voice on my right says ( Read more... )

ljidol, week 4

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morettaallstar January 8 2017, 17:24:44 UTC
Such a beautiful use of the prompt. A very evocative story. I'd love to see where Lynne ends up, how going through the first few of these as the person who knows affects her.

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kschlotwrites January 8 2017, 20:26:22 UTC

Thank you! Maybe I will write more about Lynne in the future!

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fannishliss January 10 2017, 02:23:20 UTC
wonderful!

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kschlotwrites January 10 2017, 12:45:21 UTC

Thank you!

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halfshellvenus January 10 2017, 07:08:24 UTC
This was very sweet-- and I liked the idea that the grandmother had always been there, just unnoticed, no matter how much Lynne thought she was ready to hear from her.

That's a worthy job to take over, if it makes people happy.

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kschlotwrites January 10 2017, 12:46:48 UTC

Thank you! As I was writing it, I started thinking about dropping pennies in random places myself. It could make someone's day. You never know!

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sinnamongirl January 10 2017, 08:40:31 UTC
This is super sweet and also magical :)

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kschlotwrites January 10 2017, 12:46:58 UTC

Thank you!

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jake67jake January 10 2017, 21:54:02 UTC
My grandmother's birthday was yesterday, so very appropriate timing for reading this. Very nice story.

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kschlotwrites January 29 2017, 03:21:24 UTC
Thank you! Maybe this was your penny!

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