Comments | kschlotwrites: Week 5: Fear is the Heart of Love

kschlotwrites

Week 5: Fear is the Heart of Love

Jan 14, 2017 23:08

( Some NSFW Language )

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Comments 28

lostin_thestars January 16 2017, 01:48:21 UTC

I really liked this.

kschlotwrites January 16 2017, 20:36:10 UTC

Thank you!

xlovebecomesher January 16 2017, 17:21:10 UTC

Very moving!

kschlotwrites January 16 2017, 20:36:26 UTC

Thank you!

garnigal January 16 2017, 21:00:16 UTC

Damn, that's so good.

kschlotwrites January 16 2017, 23:47:48 UTC

Thank you!

rayaso January 17 2017, 00:36:29 UTC

This was excellent! I loved the way you worked the prompt in, and managed to condense a complicated, abusive relationship. You turned the assumption of attempted suicide on its head, and make it a rational act. Good job!

eeyore_grrl January 17 2017, 17:42:30 UTC

Exactly.

kschlotwrites January 18 2017, 02:39:23 UTC

Thank you!

j0ydivided January 17 2017, 07:49:35 UTC

This flowed really well, and the interaction portrayed, as well as the relationship in the center of it, felt quite realistic. Well done!

kschlotwrites January 18 2017, 02:39:36 UTC

Thank you!