Week 16: Thunder Clap

Apr 27, 2017 18:27

Since my downfall seven years ago, I knew this day was coming. My confession, my apology. I had other opportunities to do this, but postponed it until I felt ready. Too embarrassed and too ashamed to call the attention to myself ( Read more... )

thunderclap, ljidol, week 16

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marlawentmad May 1 2017, 02:26:13 UTC

I love the format, it was so well done!

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kschlotwrites May 1 2017, 22:35:56 UTC

Thank you!

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dmousey May 1 2017, 18:19:36 UTC
This is fantastic! And clever! Reads and visualizes like a movie! With minimal detail and just dialogue, amazing. Thinking of play/script writing? Or is that on your RL resume already? Honestly, the writing is that good!

I'm a fan! Hugs and peace~~~

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kschlotwrites May 1 2017, 22:37:16 UTC

I love writing dialogue. I've actually written two short plays. I just wrote them for myself. I think only a former Literature teacher read them.

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eternal_ot May 2 2017, 07:39:51 UTC
This is pretty interesting. I loved the format and the way you used the prompt. Lovely take! Well written.

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kschlotwrites May 2 2017, 14:55:30 UTC

Thank you!

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murielle May 2 2017, 14:21:30 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Excellent use of an interview situation, loved how creatively it worked for revealing the character...characters. Thoroughly enjoyable from the first word to the last. Kudos!

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kschlotwrites May 2 2017, 14:55:47 UTC

Thank you!

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adoptedwriter May 2 2017, 21:43:35 UTC
Very unique and so entertaining!

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