The Life Endeavor part II

[ktswaz]

   There was a loud humming in her ears. Her heart pounded so hard within her chest she thought it might burst. To top it all she felt numb. Jack was never coming back to her and their small son, Wils. Five year old Wils won’t remember firsthand his father. Damn those who were responsible for her premature widowhood. She wished to God that they rot

Comments

[sej_1986]

I really enjoyed that! More soon please!! :D

[failegaidin]

I've told you before, but there's no harm in repeating myself. I'm enjoying this story, and I can't wait for you to write more.

Too bad Audrey doesn't have that "fear of Chloe O'Brian." Maybe then she would move back to DC and leave Jack alone (and us in peace!).

Good job!