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Apr 01, 2007 23:52


The Life Endeavor 
By: ktswaz (beta'd by Tessa) 
Jack Bauer/Chloe O'Brian

The metal projectile pierced through the charged air. It hit its target squarely. The intended prey felt his warm life’s fluid pump out of him as he fell. He has been ‘dead’ before and went without much regret. Not this time there was so much left unsaid to too many people. ( Read more... )

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sej_1986 April 2 2007, 07:59:34 UTC
Noooo you can't have killed Jack!!! This was so good, I'm glad you are making it into a multi chapter fic! I love the title song too :)

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rorylie April 2 2007, 12:00:08 UTC
It's very powerful and moving and just so sad.

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scianaphobia April 2 2007, 22:44:29 UTC
D:!

So saaaad. But so good all the same.

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