GK fic: One foot in front of the other 2/2

[kubis]

Part I

Comments

[salvadore_hart]

I don't know what's more hilarious, Ray kissing Nate at the beginning of practice just because or Nate's response to Trombley "I'm not going to look at your dick, Trombley," Nate says, standing in the door. "A: I'm not interested in the least. B: I forgot to bring my magnifying glass. Get over yourself."

The feel of Nate, Brad, and Ray's relationship is so functional, love the dialogue.
And I love that Brad was smart enough to pull his head out of his ass. <3

[kubis]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked the story! :D

[captainsiri]

that was beautiful. i love au!

[kubis]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[l_s_d_me]

oh my god. I want to flail and cry and hug this and be happy and sad and in love at the same time, lol.

[kubis]

:D Thank you so much for that comment! :D

[neuroticismette]

okay. wow. i can't even begin to say how much i adore this fic. in two fucking parts, you managed to put together one of the best written hs au fics ever. i was alternately reading this and screaming at my friends over at facebook about how much i love brad and nate and quoting parts off this because oh my god.

i would like to do that now, i would like to quote every part that made MY FUCKING SOUL tingle with some arcane, enlightening desire to have what you gave brad and nate in this. but i am thrumming with so much feeling and excitement, i doubt i will be able to quote everything that deserves to be quoted and i believe that would be nothing short of a disservice, so imma keep things short instead

[kubis]

Wow, your comment. Just. Thank you so much! You made my day. :D

[nemesis1108]

Oh, this was a lovely read! Loved the Nate in your fic - so steadfast and quietly confident and just waiting for Brad to come around :)

[kubis]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :D