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[kuddelfiske]

More EiI fanfic from me ... and it's slightly Alex/Jonfen this time! It's for Elizabeth in return for a Hellsing one-shot she's writing me and also as a sort of gift exchange thing. Sort of a chapter from the godawful AU, and prolly the only one that'll ever see the light of day, but it doesn't have a title. If anyone comes up with one, do tell me

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[moon_lit_night]

I love this. It's fun to think of this happening when Alex finally gets to America. Favorite parts:

-Jonathan's reaction at the computer ("AAAHH!")

-“What are you implying, Alex?” Some defensiveness entered Jonathan’s tone.
“You are looking at the smut,” stated Alex.

-“Well, I am kind of … well …” He couldn’t seem to force out the last word.
“Severely short?”
“Yes. That.”

If you have more ideas about anything else happening in America with them, I'd love to read them eventually.

[kuddelfiske]

Eep! You did like it and didn't find it totally ridiculous in the ... unfortunate way that ridiculous things sometimes are.

It's so difficult to imagine him screaming, isn't it? Jonfen has two moods ... worried and confused.

I think Alex just assumes that everybody else is just as dirty-minded as he is. If Jonathan ever got a pr0n pop-up he'd prolly freak out and then feel guilty about it for days. But of course this is all mere speculation XD

There are so many ridiculous things I've got written down ... maybe I'll continue it!

[moon_lit_night]

I kind of had the image of him when he freaked out over Sammy Davis Jr. Jr. ("Please, do not be distressed. This is only driver's seeing eye bitch." "You mean he's blind? o_o") I think he might've sounded similar... maybe not.
This is all very amusing. Poor Jonathan.
That'd be amazingly awesome :D

[kuddelfiske]

ZOMG, you're exactly right. I'd forgotten about that ... It's definitely that kind of tone.

[ci_monster]

Love it! lol, I'm so empathising with the "very not tall"

[kuddelfiske]

At least our height difference isn't *this* extreme [at least I don't thinks so XD]

[scribblefish]

Adorable! XD *claps* I approve!

[kuddelfiske]

:D !

... <3

[riza]

I love you. I love love love you. Really. Today was a terrible, terrible day, and to come home and find this wonderfully hilarious (and well written) piece of writing waiting for me was wonderful. And it made my terrible day a bit more bearable.

I remember from that little snippet of the movie that I saw, that I loved the way that Alex spoke. It made me make a noise somewhere in-between a snort and a giggle. Seeing it written down? So much better. I loved it.

I'd go into detail about all the little things that I loved, but I can't even see straight right now (so tired). I love love love this though. And I'm going to come back and read it again when I'm not half-dead from teh tired. :3 *loves on you*

[kuddelfiske]

It makes me so immeasurably happy that this helped with your bad day <3

I don't think I've quite gotten his speech down pat, yet ... but it's passable! Yay X3

Get some sleep, luv! I promise you'll feel better after you do.