Ch. 3!

[kuddelfiske]

The appetizer of caramelized papaya had been okay, Jonathan thought. He recorded the name of the dish into his small black notebook and scribbled next to it, “exquisite.” Yeah. That sounded good.

Taking absent-minded sips of unsweetened carrot juice, Jonathan surveyed the narrow room with its acid green and melon red walls, dim-lighting, and

Comments

[scribblefish]

That last sentance gave me shivers! Such amazing writing! Is this part of a longer story?! I cant wait to read more!!!! *squees*

[kuddelfiske]

Your icon is pretty.
Thank you so much~ That means a lot coming from you! I'm surprised you like this pairing XD

The other two parts:
http://kuddelfiske.livejournal.com/31236.html#cutid1
http://kuddelfiske.livejournal.com/33052.html#cutid1

[little_uyulala]

A new chapter!! :D I've just told you that, but I love the way you characterized Alex, and Jonathan as well. I loved the little part with Alex in the subway and the discussion about vodka (...and whiskey, and wine...), lol, you made really laugh :D....they're always so real *.*...and the last part, wonderful *___*
I simply loved it, thank you! ^^ ....but I want more, please!! ;)
Kisses!

[kuddelfiske]

Thanks so much! That's the highest compliment a fanfic writer can get, that the characterizations feel truthful :D

Hehe, in the process of writing more. Lots of Jonfen angst. Poor lil thing.

[ci_monster]

It's so good! Nice work Lulu. I too am a little conflicted on the title, though I am rather fond of Anarchy in the US. X3

[kuddelfiske]

Hehe, danke. I can name my weird lil fics as retardedly as I want~ Besides ... Alex might like the Sex Pistols ... they ARE from the 70s, after all.

[moon_lit_night]

I meant to comment this earlier ._. I love the lines that are italicized toward the end, and the last sentence.

[kuddelfiske]

No problem~ Your comments are always appreciated!