The Burden of White Men

Mar 13, 2005 21:52

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anonymous March 24 2005, 05:33:16 UTC
Amazingly well written.You write up shows good spirit AND you've customised your page! Excellent..that is something I must learn to do.Good luck...

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anonymous March 24 2005, 13:49:41 UTC
You said I ought to revise my comments but I cannnot...criticise this piece of writing..I'm no expert.Still..it's very well written.
Always though kep your readership in view,if you write for yourself..you're free to write as you may choose.If you write for others they define,to a certain extent how you write.If you explain a story to me for example,you will keep in mind my vocabulary,my level of intellect and my interest in the subject and craft your words,your say.So,I'm not sure who you're talking to here..this column for example makes for a great editorial... I hope I haven't offended you anywhere?I really DO love your write up.Keep going.

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kulturny March 24 2005, 15:02:50 UTC
ya went thruogh it again and i honestly think ur right, i write for my self now and actually love freestyle , but do plan to write for people...would LOVE to ,and would love to make my writings more perceptable. havnt written many articles ,and thats y want to gather sensible suggestions for my pieces.THANKS A TON FOR TAKING PAINS.And thank the "somebody" too.keep up THE good work!!LOL

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anonymous March 25 2005, 03:18:35 UTC
You're writings are perceptible.Definitely.And you don't need my suggestions:)Cheers!

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rushdie August 23 2005, 20:05:28 UTC
Why have you stopped posting? Just curious.

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reply. kulturny August 28 2005, 11:20:21 UTC
hey!!! i thought my posts were unsolicited . iam surprised. never thought you would ever stop to think about that.

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