Comments | kumquatxxi: The Therapist

kumquatxxi

The Therapist

Apr 10, 2009 12:47

VERY rough, from line by line. Mature themes. Critique?

( Another man's hair wrapped in her fist. )

she just couldn't help herself, line by line, writing, therapist

Comments 3

alicepotato April 10 2009, 17:16:43 UTC

Wow, honestly, if I didn't know you wrote this, I really would've thought it came from some established adult writer! O_O Impressive!

kumquatxxi April 11 2009, 00:49:13 UTC

Well thank you!
Hearing that from a potato in a dress really makes me feel good about myself. :D

Also, I've been humming Bazigaar o Bazigaar all day today. XD

alicepotato April 12 2009, 00:48:30 UTC

It is a well-known fact that potatoes in fancy dress are the best critics of literature!