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Romantic on a Subway
Dec 10, 2006 01:37
There was motion
There was noise,
but all i felt was the rising of her breath
and its soft exhalation.
she was looking away
Looking past the walls
we search, and only find
no time blooms so deeply
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anonymous
December 12 2006, 20:00:55 UTC
u gotta know, beyond romance there is real love
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Its not just the title
kungfuzankou
December 12 2006, 20:17:41 UTC
read the second stanza
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