Comments | kungfuzankou: Natural Selection

kungfuzankou

Natural Selection

Jan 16, 2007 15:35

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oooh asyouwish940 January 20 2007, 05:17:14 UTC

I really like the idea of this poem, but the first few stanzas got tedious. were they supposed to?

maybe there could be a different structure to this idea...

__thisbe February 17 2007, 01:40:54 UTC

This reminds me of the one you wrote some years ago where each proceeding word began with the proceeding letter of the alphabet. I'm sure there's a term for that, but I don't know it.

sorta like a sestina? asyouwish940 March 7 2007, 05:04:14 UTC

http://www.public.asu.edu/~aarios/formsofverse/reports2000/page9.html

innocent_crime March 7 2007, 05:13:55 UTC

No, but nice try, show-off. ♥

Something like Alice bit Calvin during every Friday... etc. That was so elementary, but I'm sure you understand what I mean now.

And hi, Katie! You must either be very bored to come back to this post or you have a big crush on Armen. I can't blame you either way.

innocent_crime March 7 2007, 05:40:45 UTC

Now I know why you were confused. I explained it way incorrectly. Lo siento.