Good job! I like the general flow and structure of this one but it's probably one of the most depressing poems I've ever read! EVER! I don't know when you wrote it but it sounds as if you are saying sorry for waaaay too much! Especially the last stanza. YOU SHOULD NEVER BE SORRY FOR WHO YOU ARE!!!!! You are one of the most caring and genuine people I know! It's hard to find anyone that is even half the person you are! I wouldn't change one single thing about you if I could. This poem is a true anthem to suffering. Even though it was very depressing, I think it's probably the best ones you have posted as of yet! I'm in the process of writing one now but I am stuck on the fourth stanza! I should have it posted sometime this weekend though for your reading pleasure. Keep 'em coming! Love ya bunches!! ~Leah beah bo beah banana fanna fo feah mi my mo meah LEAH!
look dont be sorry for who you are or what can or cant do i understand everything going on everything happens for a reason or vise versa you never know just know you have friends that are there for you some time you just cant help somethings right now im in limbo in my own my mind........................
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~Leah beah bo beah banana fanna fo feah mi my mo meah LEAH!
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in my own my mind........................
truly
a secret
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