Seeking Light - Chapter 12B

[kurai_kumori]

Title: Seeking Light
Pairings: Kyuwook, Minwook, Eunhae, Kangteuk, Sihanchul, Heeteuk!friendship ( a lot more later, i promise)
Rating: PG13 maybe ( i'm quite violent, hehe)

Summary: Kyuhyun was born and raised as a member of the Dark Society, an organization where death and killing were inevitable and violence was part of life. Not even as he

Comments

[fatin_wookie]

kya...i love it
thanx for update it
love u <3

[kurai_kumori]

thanks for loving this part:)

i'm glad you didn't find it boring ^^

[kyuwook13]

spot~~ /brb read ^^/

[kyuwook13]

wooooaaah~ the 'war' has been leveling up!! \^^/ woops woops~
and hahhaa, i can tell that Min's felt more upset about Kyu's chalenging actions even now XD yaaah~ n Wookie is just as clueless as he can be X3 my innocent wookie~~ /get glared by kyu T^T

this is getting more n more interesting!
will surely wait for the next :D
hwaitting!

[kurai_kumori]

thanks very much^^
I'm glad you like this part...
even though it wasn't so well organized...hehe
sorry about that...

[kyuwook13]

yeaah, this part is fun to read! kyu n min attitude amused me XD
no no, it well organized for me :) so you doesn't have to sorry keke~

ahh, and i curious about some guys in the like 2 previous chapter *probably 11? i forgot..
\^^/

[moonshine19]

Kyuuuuu~ the Vomiter!!! I like it LOL~~

ahh I know now you put Sungmin as an evil, to Kyuhyun.
then Wookie would pay sweet attention and sympathy to Kyu more than someone else :D
well, the fake Sungmin's scene was actaully the same from some dramas in my country, but this evil role should be played by girls haha =)

you didn't disappoint us!!! it's good and funny.
truthfully I expected the more serious scene, like involving mafia stuff or something like that since you implied in the last few chapters about that so I was really curious. xD
but you loosened up the tension by using the theme park as the background, so it couldn't be more serious and dramatic. it ended up interesting though :))

Gambatte kudasai!!! I'm rooting for youuu~

[kurai_kumori]

ahhh...sorry about that...:(
actually, this is supposed to be the mafia type of fic...
I still can't get my mind out of the gutter though...hehe
I'm confused with this fic myself...

it's my first fic so i'm still improving it...sigh* hopefully i can improve

this is just the fluff part that i wanted to try out...hehe...poor me...i'm not really the fluff maker XD

I'll be working on this a little bit more carefully...^^

domo arigatou for reading this, neh? *bows*
I hope to meet your expectations soon ^^

[moonshine19]

Nah.. don't have to be sorry.
I just said what I felt and expected. Still I enjoyed your story very much.

Writing is the art where you release your imagination, so you don't have to be bothered with few unexpected comments from others(like me) that confuse you or shake you mind hehe ^_^
Just be confident with your thought :D
and it's nice you've tried writting the part you think you're not an expert at, I mean the fluffy part ;P and you're doing good, ok?

hope you will improve as much as you wish and update soon!
I'm rooting for you~!!

[kurai_kumori]

hehe...thanks...

i'm still working on the next part which i hope will put this fic back on track...not really ready yet, though...*pouting with a this-is-all-my-school's-fault look*

hehe...i'm glad you're still rooting for me after all this time...
i'm sooo happy that there's still someone who's reading my fics after all the delays in the update...

domo arigatou for the advise:)

[ita90]

Yey Update! I couldn't wait ^^ Thank you.
I was laughing when reading this, It was so amusing when they bickering ^^

[kurai_kumori]

thanks so much for liking it...:)

[jongkeylove17]

oh the war for wookies attention is entertaining xD hrmmm i felt bad when they were argueing while wookie was still there before going on the roller coaster! he should have slipped away and go do his own thing

advice? what kind hun?

[kurai_kumori]

well, i just noticed that i was slipping a bit on my fic:(

I'm not really good at writing...
i have my important parts laid out in my brain but how to connect them all into one story is a bit hard...

this chapie wasn't actually part of the important parts...more like a connecting chapie for the next part of the fic and it turns out to be more confusing than i actually imagined it...

maybe i shouldn't have written it at all?
help please?

[jongkeylove17]

it's ok! it happens to everyone! sometimes straying is good so long as you don't stray to much... it'll come to you, just try every little possible way to connect everything

hope this helps...

[kurai_kumori]

hehe...thanks...

i just hope i don't stray too far from my fic...i never really thought about how hard it was to make fictions until i made one myself...call it curiosity when i first made this fic...

I'll work hard for it:)

thanks for the advice:D