Then and Now

Aug 13, 2011 21:02

Title: Then and Now
Pairing: Kyuwook
Genre: pg-13 (for use of foul languages)
Summary: They had spent their entire lives fighting. Who would have thought?

Warning: excessive abuse of some foul languages

When they were 4 and 5 years old, they were enemies….“Leeteuk-hyuuuung!!!” a rather loud, high-pitched screech sent the preschool teacher ( Read more... )

super junior, kyuwook, oneshot

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hatchling6 August 14 2011, 16:01:42 UTC
Aww~ it's really cute!!!
Thanks for writing~

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kurai_kumori August 15 2011, 07:18:44 UTC
thanks for reading and commenting ^_^
i'm glad you liked it

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ilovefics09 August 18 2011, 13:12:07 UTC
I really really love this story. So funny, lovely, cutie etc. ^^

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kurai_kumori August 19 2011, 03:54:24 UTC
thanks for liking the fic...hey, if it's no trouble, could you please like my fic in kyuwook.net? i joined the contest but i'm really doutbful about winning :(

can you please vote me here http://kyuwook.com/polls/kyuwookcontestpoll2011.html

I'm not forcing you of course ^_^
thanks again :D

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sayhell August 19 2011, 14:19:59 UTC
I like how you write, how sincere you are in your work. =)) I've browsed through your works and you're definitely improving. Keep it up and keep your fire burning. =D

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kurai_kumori August 21 2011, 09:33:39 UTC
thanks ^_^

i was aiming to be a real writer...i hope that i'll be good enough to be able to publish a real book someday when i'm older...haha...but then, maybe i'm expecting too much n_n

thanks again :)

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moonshine19 August 19 2011, 14:45:05 UTC
uhmm..ok what kind of preschool is this!? soaping mouth is the punishment!! LOL
and their childhood ...violent jerks. VERY interesting.
your humor is amazing as always. (ex. Father Siwon) /laughing hard/ lolololol

it's random but this is a one-shot, so it is usually random ;D
Playing with time is fun, getting to know what have changed in them time by time.
the story was going on smoothly, only the confession part took me aback, it's like...why all of a sudden!? xD however, it's still sweet =]
I guess you've used what you practiced in Seeking Light, I mean, fluffy or romantic scene.
hope you'll win. they chose top 5, right? I think you'd be the one of those. ;))
ps. I'm not a writer, so I participated with my FanArt instead.(it's diamond - 5 Years of Love, did you have a look?) :D

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kurai_kumori August 21 2011, 09:50:58 UTC
hehe...actually, i was having a LOT of trouble on how to place my confession scene XD...i actually made the fic with the first 3 years then the wedding...haha...their "19 and 20 years old" had been left blank for a long, long time LOL...i went into panic mode when it was five hours till deadline of submissions so...ahahaha...further randomness in that part...

i'm glad that you still liked it (despite the random part LOL)...

oh, i've seen your fanart...It was so SWEET...yeah, i voted for it as well...i really liked it...

i'm not so sure about me winning but hey, it was fun making this one so win or not win, it's okay...(looking back, i wonder what this fic would turn out to be if it wasn't made in just one day...the confession part was soooo random LOL)...i'll try and do better next time :D

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moonshine19 August 22 2011, 09:03:08 UTC
Haha.. at least you tried and participated on time!
I was barely on time too. lol
it's such a nice event gathering all KyuWook fans and spazzing over creative works, once a year, and maybe not every year. so I call it a special occasion. :))

don't worry. I think you'll win. if not, it's still good for you and readers xD

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kurai_kumori August 22 2011, 11:26:23 UTC
yeah,i know...i was sooo glad to know that someone actually made an event for my favorite pair :)

i hope there'll be more of this sort of event XD

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criztalinz January 29 2012, 17:34:53 UTC
Aww.. so sweet!!! XD

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