FIC # 002

May 28, 2008 17:21



Title: Big Brother

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lost_girl11 May 28 2008, 09:46:59 UTC
guess what i'm still online. aaaannnd poor chinen. :( but uhm idk, i guess i'm in no position to say so since i don't like him much. D:

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lost_girl11 May 28 2008, 09:51:27 UTC
also, yaaaaaaaay you really did it!

*sends huggles and sparkles your way* This was a totally random request of mine and i'm happy you indulged. ♥

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kuro_tenshii18 May 28 2008, 14:11:18 UTC
haha. yes. I really did. For you. You asked for it. LOL ♥

woot! X3 *hugs* thanks for the sparkles too! ^^ Ahaha. I will do all requests from me, as long as I can do it. :D ♥

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lost_girl11 May 28 2008, 16:37:01 UTC
Aaawww. :D♥

I feel really guilty now. Your lovejuice thing is still pending. D:

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kaishinyah May 28 2008, 11:20:30 UTC
nyah~ i love angst! i'm so happy you made this fic. angst!
the only angst fics. i've been reading are only my own... >.<
anyway... you did great! you really suite angst!
although it's nice to try different genres once in a while... ^^

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knackchan08 May 28 2008, 12:11:20 UTC
*singit lang*

Okaaay, we have one thing we don't have in common, after all: I HATE ANGST. :))

*alis na ulit*

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kaishinyah May 28 2008, 12:16:21 UTC
rofl. awww... ganun... i laab angst eh...
oh well... it's only a minor difference... lol. XD

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knackchan08 May 28 2008, 12:21:40 UTC
Haha. Weeeell, I want a world full of happiness and love. :))
It will not get in the way of our friendship. ♥ *nods*

OH YEAH. MAY ATRASO PA KO SAYO. *shot* Yosh, I'll comment on your entries now. as in. NOW. *runs*

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knackchan08 May 28 2008, 12:19:00 UTC
LOL at the fic title. XDD Damn it, I still don't know how PBB got hold of "Prisoner of Love". >.>

“Yuto! What’s taking you so long? Hurry up! The Ramen shop’s going to close soon!”
Yuto's the slave, Yamada's the owner. LOL. :)) Well it seems like it. XDD

Sorry, Chinen. Yamajima is OTP, y'know. :P But poor Chinen, I/other people can't accept Yamajimachii as OT3. DDD:

Whee~ I'm happy that you wrote HSJ even if it was a dare. XD But...I still don't approve of YutoChii. :))
I'm also glad I helped a bit in this fic. XD;

I think it sucks because it's angst. .__. That's about it. XD

Konnichiwa, Kumiko-chan. Nakashima Michiyo desu. ^_^

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kuro_tenshii18 May 28 2008, 14:06:16 UTC
Wala n akong maisip na title e. Hinabol ko n nga lng un kasi maliligo pa ako. LOL O.O WTF. I will watch PBB. O__O Haaaaaaaaay~ sa Japan yan malamang. Magpapalaabs na daw ang ABS ng Jdramas wtf. >.>

LOL I was dared. I didn't even know what to do when ate lau changed her dare for me. AND IT WAS ANOTHER FIC. O.O But there, I finished it. And I am glad. ♥

LOL You hate angst, but the storyline, is it..err..good enough?

Hehehe. I prefer Tsubaki. I asked a lot of people which they prefer. And they answered Tsubaki. Oh anyway, you could call me both. :D Yoroshiku, Michiyo-chan! ♥

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knackchan08 May 28 2008, 14:39:51 UTC
Haha. Okay, okay. XD I already heard it twice there. DD: Kaya nga eh. Siguro may JE fan within the staff of ABS...*looks around*

Ahaha. XDD Yeah, it's great you finished it. ^_^

Yeah, it is. :)

Oohh, I see. I'll call you Tsubaki-chan, then. :D ♥

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kuro_tenshii18 May 28 2008, 15:00:29 UTC
I don't really mind you calling me both names. XD I'll change my name in my profile tomorrow. XD

yes, i think so too. ^-^ *looks around with you*

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lakuru_san May 28 2008, 13:58:20 UTC
All honesty... Its not bad, its actually good. But I think it lacks a little more angst in there. More of a one sided love romance that cannot be conveyed.

Well don't mind me maybe the level of my prefered angst is a lot higher than what you can handle. Hahaha! I've read so much fic in my life and I don't usually comment if the fic is an ultimate bleh.

I am expecting more fics from you, ne! There! *cheers* ^_^

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kuro_tenshii18 May 28 2008, 14:23:09 UTC
Haha. It sucked, didn't it? hehe. Thanks for the comment though! ^^ Yes I know. HEHE. I kinda don't know what to put in the genre part. LOL and the title when I was writing it. :D:D:D

ahaha. yes yes. I am only a begginer writer so yeah, please deal with my level of angsty-ness first. :D:D:D I will try to improve next time, I promise! *if there'll be a next time*

hehehe. Sure..sure. I will try to write more fics to improve my writing skill. :D thanks~

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lakuru_san May 29 2008, 02:16:32 UTC
It does not suck. There are more sucky fics out there, believe me. You don't wanna read those. Hahaha!

Can I request pairings for your future fic?
Some TegoPi or ShigePi would be nice... Hahaha! Nagdemand pa!

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kuro_tenshii18 May 29 2008, 03:04:56 UTC
AHahaha. okay then. Thanks~

Aww! I guess I still have to write fics. LOL Haha suresure. Both? O.o I'll try, ne? ;;) :D

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ada_nikki May 28 2008, 15:19:26 UTC
lol I thought you didn't like HSJ

This pairing scares me.

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kuro_tenshii18 May 29 2008, 02:50:36 UTC
This was a dare. A DARE YOU HEAR ME? I prefer to write the OTP in HSJ demo..this was a dare. :)) And I must do it. XD Well, I had fun writing it anyway..so..yeah. :D

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