Comments | kurobon: KHR TYL1827 Doujin - Before the Death 1 *Listen

kurobon

KHR TYL1827 Doujin - Before the Death 1 *Listen

Jul 12, 2010 01:10

This one is TYL, also it ties to another doujin, ‘The Return Home’

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hibari, doujinshi, khr, 1827, tsuna

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erus_ira July 11 2010, 18:34:25 UTC

This one totally fits my image of their relationship! In other words it was great!! (>o<)/
Though I can see it either way, getting tonfa'd or being forced onto....it's all 1827 too me~

I know what you mean about drawing too guys having sex.....both technically and emotionally? well on my part that it
As always it was pleasure to read and I hope to see more soon~

Ja'ne~

kurobon July 12 2010, 15:40:45 UTC

well, for me technically would be very difficult ^^

emcyclopedia July 11 2010, 20:16:09 UTC

A-A-AWESOME LIKE ALWAYYYSS

prongsiee July 11 2010, 20:16:57 UTC

I really liked this, nicely done! ♥

How many times do I have to read it to satisfy my inner fangirl? katierox342 July 11 2010, 20:51:31 UTC

Seriously? This is fucking AWESOME!
I love LOVE love! All your works, no matter what, but this one is just so...THERE ARE NO WORDS TO PROPERLY DESCRIBE IT IN ENGLISH!!
Canon is one probably
I can honestly imagine this happening, although as you mentioned it's more likely that Hiba-chan would beat on him, and I think Tsunayoshi wouldn't have the heart to fight back, or something. Any chance of you doing the alternate ending of what you originally imagined?
Still this is absolutely perfect!
As for my cracked up comments
You totally know that Hiba-chan smexed him after he woke up as revenge for falling asleep XD *shot*
Okay the stupid one will shut up now XP
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you times infinity and BEYOND! *shot for poor toy story reference*

~Katie

Re: How many times do I have to read it to satisfy my inner fangirl? kurobon July 12 2010, 15:42:53 UTC

well, thanks for considering the alternate ending. i guess i won't go for it since i still have many other doujins to write. and there'll be part 2 to this too :D

maguro27 July 11 2010, 21:53:36 UTC

Awesome 'til the end, where Tsuna faints. XD
I loved Hibari's expressions, it really shows how much he cares for Tsuna (and how possessive he tends to be with his 'things').

kurobon July 12 2010, 15:44:00 UTC

i agree. it's told that he's free and untied to anyone, right? but from later anime it was shown too that he was possessive of his belongings.