Love is.

Aug 07, 2008 09:54

My Summer 2008 contest entry. Just a drabble; pretty short and simple :3

Category: Read It
Rating: G (no adult content)
Pairing: Kurogane/Fai; Fai + the rest of the travelers
Theme: Yes
Title: Love is.
Summary: Fai bleeds, and Kurogane tells him what it means.
Genre: Angst/Hurt&Comfort
Spoilers: Subtle hints of Fai's past, nothing major or ( Read more... )

r: g, a: contest 2008, c: kurogane/fai, f: fanfic/writing

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hullabaloo August 7 2008, 06:16:16 UTC
oh this is so lovely! And angsty!

Fai bleeds, and Kurogane feels more than sees it, feels more than knows it.

*sigh*

and

Kurogane has never been wrong.

So much is said in so few words.

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robotlove August 7 2008, 06:22:25 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you found my lines such xD and that you liked it. Thanks for commenting! <3

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zianthyst August 7 2008, 08:26:32 UTC
*eyes sparkles* I don't know what to say, but I know I enjoyed this a lot!

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kameo_chan August 12 2008, 15:53:52 UTC
Wow. Just... Wow. Amazing... I've never read a drabble before that's had this much of an impact on me. I love your portrayal of Fai here, because really, Fai is the type who'd bleed, who'd suffer in silence for those he cares about. And the way that he just resigns himself to the fact that he loves not only Kurogane, but the rest of the group as well. On the spot characterization and a beautiful, fluent read! Like I said before, just wow! ^_^

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robotlove August 13 2008, 07:10:43 UTC
Arigatou Gozaimasu!! ♥

I'm very happy to hear that it worked for you and that you liked it so. I love Fai for his smiles and playfulness as well, but I couldn't resist something that explored what was actually lying beneath all that ^^;

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toxicbullets August 13 2008, 23:41:42 UTC
I haven't read many Kuro/Fai fanfics, but I really appreciated this one. Very well written. I love this line,
"Fai smiles, and it is sad, but knowing, resigned and beautiful."

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zakei September 3 2008, 11:22:14 UTC
KYAAAA. HEE. I LOVE THIS. BLEH YOU SUCK. CAUSE I'M JESLOUS I CAN'T WRITE AS WELL AS YOU. MY LEGS ARE ITCHY FROM PUPPY BITES AND SCRATCHES. THIS IS GOING TO MY MEMORIES. >:D

(i don't normally use caps this excessively, but this is a special occasion that warrants the use of caps as such. *bows*)

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