"These Quiet Hours", oneshot, RukixReita

Nov 04, 2008 16:52

Title: "These Quiet Hours"
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: smut, romance?
Warnings: explicit sex
Rating: NC-17
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: RukixReita
Synopsis: Leaning down, Ruki laid a small kiss on Reita’s temple, watching how the other man furrowed his brow slightly at the action. Ruki let out a quiet chuckle, tracing ( Read more... )

genre: romance, jfetish_15, rating: nc-17, band: gazette, type: fic, genre: smut, reitaxruki

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vanilla69 November 4 2008, 15:40:18 UTC
*hugs* It was readable, it was really good! Don't stress yourself about it~
But it's like in real life, first you only want a little, something like a handjob and then it turns out to be more as you can't stop XD
Ruki isn't that fluffy, I think? ö_ö

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kuroi_fuyu November 7 2008, 14:08:43 UTC
aww, thank you hun~ ^^ *huggles*
haha, so true now! xD it's impossible to hold back at that point anymore.. *chuckle*
But he's a lot fluffier than normal ;D XD
Ne, thank you so much for reading and beta'ing since this was a total mess x'D ^_^

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ryuchan27 November 4 2008, 15:45:30 UTC
gah!
well I liked it,
and at least Ruki still dominated him XD
dude I totally understand,
things just lead to smuttier things >.>
*shakes head*
I SWEAR IT STARTED OUT INNOCENT!!!!
Tora: right kitten, right...
Kitten: it did!!! *pouts*

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kuroi_fuyu November 7 2008, 14:09:37 UTC
aah, Ruki will always dominate Rei's ass xD
haha XDD but ne, can't help it ;P
Thank you so much for reading once again^_^

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ryuchan27 November 7 2008, 23:08:48 UTC
kiya!
ofcorse!
I love reading these!
no problem doll =(^,,^)=
Tora: Shut up, you're going to scare them
Kitten: AM NOT!
tora: *nods*
kitten: *smacks*...I'M SO SORRY TORA-SAN!
tora: *pouts* meanie
kitten: but I love you~!

gah!
did you know Tora wears Nightmare Before Christmas boxers!!!!!!!!????????????
my friend just told me
I'M SO FREAKING HAPPY!!!!
life couldn't get better for me
when Tora wears Nightmare Before Christmas boxers...
that is unless Reita started OR is! XD
this is so off topic...>.<
GREAT FIC! :D

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zb24 November 4 2008, 15:48:08 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this! It was one of those more emotion filled smut stories instead of just:

Ruki's cock inside Reita's ass blah~ blah~ *boom* *bam* They come and~~~!! Story's over.

It felt a bit deeper then that, more romantic... Which I like. (^_^) I think you did really good.

I just love the way you wrote this for some reason, I can't get over it. I'm adding it to my memories... for later. (^_~)

About your A/N: I hate to see when people aren't confident about the things they write. I've read enough "bitchy seme Ruki" smut to last me a lifetime, reading him being all soft a fuzzy is a nice, welcome change.

Good job~! (^_~)v

~ZB24~

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kuroi_fuyu November 7 2008, 14:12:25 UTC
aww, I'm glad you felt that way^_^ I wanted the scene between them to be more on the romantic side and it seems I succeeded in it then :3
And I'm flattered for you adding it to your memories *-*
*nervous chuckle* I'm never confident about things I write^^; when writing I feel like "Okay, this is going alright!" but then reading it through a couple of times, I start getting more nervous about it by every word^^; I should work on that problem, heh^^;
But ne, thank you so much for your kind words and reading and all *-* ^_^

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zb24 November 9 2008, 04:08:08 UTC
No problem! You're welcome. (^_^)

~ZB24~

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metal_beauty_69 November 4 2008, 18:47:07 UTC
*___________*
nice thing to wake up to for me also <3 ahaha

I'm really glad you decided to add more than just a handjob! I mean... come on... these two in bed... oh my xD things are bound to happen right :P

I really liked Ruki being fluffy! it fits in this case, because he's secretly watching Reita sleep and that's just #):(*%#)(IFJK"LK# *O*

just what I like! hot and sweet at the same time~
you. are. AWESOME. <3

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kuroi_fuyu November 7 2008, 14:15:33 UTC
smut for breakfast! *giggle* ;D
haha, couldn't agree more on that! xD nothing can hold these bunnies up.. *chuckle*
yea? awww, good to hear^_^ it was just so funny to write a fluffier Ruki when I'm used to writing him as the ultimate seme for so many times in a row again XD I guess he has his sweeter moments too ^_~
I'm no awesome, you are *-* but thank you so much for reading and being always so nice hun! <3 ^_^

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yumyumruki November 4 2008, 19:43:16 UTC
Ahh! i was just saying yesterday that i love these 'middle of the night in bed' fics.. O__O okay that sounds kinda obvious but whatever XDD
Loved it *O* as always, some good seme! Ruki *insert drooling emote* XD

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kuroi_fuyu November 7 2008, 14:16:21 UTC
really?? :D haha, what a coninsidence x)
*chuckles* ne, thank you hun 8D for reading and commenting as well <3

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