"Would you mind if..?", oneshot, RukixKai

May 02, 2010 01:25

Title: "Would you mind if..?"
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: romance, slight angst
Warnings: none really
Rating: PG-13
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: RukixKai
Synopsis: The wind whirled some lonely curls of hair before Kai's eyes and there was something in those dark orbs that Ruki couldn't quite decipher.
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genre: romance, rukixkai, band: gazette, rating: pg-13, type: fic, genre: angst

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kuroi_fuyu May 5 2010, 07:57:22 UTC
Aw~ Thank you~ I'm glad you liked it^^ I really didn't know if this was to be any good xD;
Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting!^^

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batskull_69 May 1 2010, 22:43:41 UTC
Aw! This was really a surprise! *_* Both cause I didn't think you'd post and that it'd be RuKai raburabu~!
See? Random is good! I liked it so much, is so cute and Ruki is an adorable little thing hiding inside his sexy jacket~ Fufufu, that part was so... aw, squishable xD~
-sighs- Is really good to read these guys! -insert dancing panda- <3
Kai was really... Kai. Though it hurt to feel him all lonely and sad, but yay >D Kiss him all you want Kai, no need to ask~! Please do carry on with the little session <3
Ah! The lighter part = WIN. I can so picture that in my head like... seriously~!

Thank you! It totally was more than just good! *_* And that also feels weird! Is like... who am I? LOL -gets bricked- xD~

O_O Uh, long comment! Let's stop babbling~ -sends cookies and Rei your way- Thanks :D!

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kuroi_fuyu May 5 2010, 08:04:35 UTC
Whii~ Hehe, at least every once in a while I'm able to surprise >D
Aw, I'm happy you did~ *-* haha, I bet Kai would've wanted to squish Ruki that moment too *giggle*
:33 It's good to write them too~ I haven't written them much but it's always a pleasure >3 and yay for dancing panda x3
Was he? O: ah, that's good to hear! awww~ ._. ahih, but yea, luckily the cure was close and now neither of them have to be lonely anymore >D
Haha xD It was playing in my head and I could not resist putting it there x'D glad you liked that one >D

Aw, you're more than welcome, dear! You liking it makes me wanna jam like the panda's lil' fellow *giggles* ahaha xD silly~ <3

Whiii~ long comment is long and makes me happy >3 O_O *accepts with open arms* ..though Rei ate the cookies on the way here! D: that bastard xD *chuckle* ah, no problem!! I'm more than glad it pleased :3
Thank you so much for reading and commenting~ <3

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kawasakininja May 2 2010, 12:53:40 UTC
I quite enjoyed your Kai here. Just everything about him, dialogue lines, actions, although nothing out of the ordinary, seemed very genuine, honest and open, with clear intent. I loved the little touches.

“Well...”, Kai started but then stopped, shaking his head in amusement as he noticed the black lighter peeking out from the hip pocket of Ruki's jeans.

Taking it out he raised it in front of the brunette's face whose eyes instantly got round from surprise. Flicking it on Kai put his other hand as the wind barrier and waited till Ruki had lit his cigarette. Then he put the lighter back to where he'd taken it from and gave Ruki's bum a small tap as if to remind him where the lighter was located.

Okay, this killed me. I mean the hip, lighting up Ruki's cigarette with the other hand as a shield and then the bum! Such a sensual moment, and just like the other with Kai throwing Ruki's cigarette down, had me transfixed by his actions and the slight undercurrent of hunger behind them.

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kuroi_fuyu May 5 2010, 08:11:22 UTC
Thank you~ Hearing that makes me really happy 'cause I don't write him that often so it's always a bit frightening whether it'll turn out okay or not^^;

Ah, glad you enjoyed those little moments. Both were so vivid in my head but of course when writing them down they change a bit so.. but seems like what I wanted to say did come out quite clear :3

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!^^

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pandesal_luv May 2 2010, 15:23:06 UTC
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I really like Kai here!!!~~~
He's so manly! And a manly Kai always catches my attention. (O w O)
The descriptions were beautifully written! I love it!~

The drummer's forehead resting on his own Ruki watched as Kai slowly opened his eyes again yet his gaze remained downcasted, fixed on the slightly parted lips so close to his own.

This one just made my brain fill itself with fluff. x333 <333
No wait...every sentence made my smile bigger!!! It was just so friggin cute, dammit!
An adorable Ruki and a manly Kai = xDDD <333

I should write about this pairing more~
Adding to my memories~
Thank you for sharing! (^______^)

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kuroi_fuyu May 5 2010, 08:17:30 UTC
Yay~ that makes me and Kai!muse happy! :3
Ah yes, manly Kai is <3 *chuckle*
Aw, thank you~ *-* I got quite frustrated at some parts for I couldn't write down exactly what was on my mind but if you enjoyed, I'm glad^^

Awww~ *chuckle* and now you made me smile >3

I will try and see if the inspiration to write them again will come soon :3
*-* -feels honored for her fic being mem'ed-
Thank you for reading and commenting! :33

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kuroi_fuyu May 5 2010, 08:18:48 UTC
caring and daring! *giggle* yosh, thank you! :33
I'm really happy you liked it!^^
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!^_^

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