Another year, another bit of a story

[kuroi_inochi]

 I'm a little tired, from the over-watching of TV today. I can feel the time trickling by and I know that it won't be long until I'm back in college, sitting at those tables, watching the teachers get confused by the interactive whiteboards, listening to people jabbering and arguing, and creating my wonderful doodles out of sheer boredom. 
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[sojourner_cries]

I feel like these sections started off a little roughly, but that they became more and more polished as they went on. My favorite line was

He wondered if the gods they had revered were dead or living, and if they were alive, whether they minded the presence of someone who didn’t even know their names.

And I enjoyed the fourth chapter-y section quite a bit :) .
Your poor characters! It just keeps getting worse and worse for them, doesn't it? Lion is such an intriquing character, but I don't think that I like him as a person very much! lol
And I think that you need to be dragging people back. *pokes*
(Sorry for how long this took O.o .)
So, when do I get to read more? :P

[kuroi_inochi]

Hmm...*rereads* Perhaps you're right. My editing process might have failed me a bit :P I guess I got more into the flow as I went on XD
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^ Ha! Wait and see what I have planned! *evil cackle* I suppose I don't like Lion very much either, but I have a sort of affection for him, probably because Michel loves him so much. He's a terrible brother though! :P
I know! They don't love me! *sniff* At least you do!XD
Well I have the next part ready, I was waiting to see if someone would eventually read this one :P I'll just have to get around to posting it. Maybe this weekend?

[true_ghost]

im commenting look!
7 lines down.. were you meant to write a hush fell over the crown =P and you wrote the instead of he somewhere in 2nd section...
BUT its good and im worried that i would be one of these people suckered in by a lion type =O
What is the point in having desires? They only end up being the ruin of you.
i like that too. =) (i just learned how to quote xD )
AND your introduction was quite dramatic too...and that is all for now =P

[true_ghost]

AND THE QUOTE DIDNT WORK PROPERLY COS IT WAS ALREADY ITALICS
:'(

[kuroi_inochi]

I know! :O Omg!
No I was not XD Thank you for pointing that out :P
You wouldn't be suckered in, you don't believe in anything. Plus you're afraid of sunlight. And thank you!
Sorry about the quote not working :P That's such a typical phrase for you to pick up on XD And thank you once more!
I was in dramatic mode, can't quite remember why. I thought recently that my resolution might be crumbling (as you might remember :P) but I'm ok since seeing you. ^^
merci for the eventual comment! :D

[true_ghost]

thats the second time ive been told im afraid of the sun today >_<
well you wrote said typical phrase so its your fault you appeal to my "types" *sniff*
with gods help you can cure this terrible affliction.
(not the drama-queen-ness o course =P )