[Fic - Viewfinder] "The Stranger" Chapter 1

[kuromontsuki]

Fan Fiction based on Yamane Ayano's Viewfinder Series

Title: The Stranger
Chapter: 1
Characters: Original Character-Fei Long
Rating: 15+ Suitable for 15 years old and over
Disclaimer: All characters appeared in Viewfinder series belong to Yamane Ayano.

Before you proceed, please spare a few seconds reading my interpretation on Fei Long. This will

Comments

[fuzzys]

Hey this is really good and all very plausible. English is not my native language either so I know how hard it is to write something like this. Except for a few minor errors you did a great job! I am really looking forward to next chapter.
BTW, I wonder how many people hit on Feilong and live to tell the tale?? :)

[chibi_gakuto]

I was interested to read your story after I read your interpretation of Feilong. Cos except the oyaji comment, I agree with all that you said. Not that an older guy is not okay, just that for me as long as the guy is able to make him happy, soothe away his pain and protect him (yes protect him cos i think he definitely needs protection despite what Fei himself might think), then age doesn't really matter.

That aside, I love your story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

PS. This is definitely not a "third-rate story" as you so humbly claimed it to be.

[nafra]

Fufufu.
Seme with glasses.
Fufufu...beware Fei, semes with glasses are a dangerous species.
I'm looking forward for the next chapters.

[doitwell]

Oh, next chapter please!:) Hmm,someone handsome enough to give FeiLong pause,he must really be something. And I agree with your assessment of FeiLong-he seems to give off this walking wounded feeling, even as he's doing really bad things. He makes you want to care for him, but carefully, least you get bitten as he tries to protect himself.

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[anonymous]

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