Kuro's writing exercise 2

[kuroshin]

Okay, this will be my second writing exercise as answer to 2D Teleidoscope's challenge. This week's challenge is to write something that incorporates this phrase.

drink another between night & blue

... and here's the stuff that I wrote. Hopefully, this is okay. Comments are very appreciated.

Comments

[breyzyyin]

I liked it. This was really good! I liked how you described the bar in particular. I could really picture it. ♥

[kuroshin]

Thanks!