Loving you - Chapter 13 (last chapter)

[kuroyukisama_17]

Title: Loving you

Author: kuroyukisama_17Pairing: Yamajima (main), NakaChii (side), YamaHaru

Comments

[sayukino11]

my heart ached and i cried....
though they are doing great...

otsukare~

[kuroyukisama_17]

haha~ sorry2 :(

but still, thanks for reading and commenting here... I really appreciate it

[ryofin30]

Daijoubu, I'll accept this :D
as long as yama is the uke I accept it XD <3. Although they didn't unite but their hearts still united #ciee

Love this story~

Thank's for writing Yuki-chan \^o^/

[kuroyukisama_17]

glad to hear that... X)

anyway, thanks for reading and commenting ^^/

[aprilfantasie]

omg...didn't expect the ending will be like this...Yeah, not all the endings would be happy...but this one sure torture Yuto a lot...I'm hoping Yuto to knew that boy are his child with Ryosuke...though Ryosuke already married to Dai-chan...It make me want a sequel for them to get an explannations from each other...Somehow it feel so sad to see their life like this...T_T

Anyway...Otsukare Yuki-chan...Thank you for updating this last chapter!

[kuroyukisama_17]

no one expected the ending like that~~~ fufu... X (

yeah, maybe seeing Ryosuke with Daiki did torture Yuto... he still in love with Ryosuke;
ah! that's a sign for a sequel right? saa... maybe there's a sequel, but I don't when will I finish it. I was so busy with school work nowadays and barely had time to write fan-fiction... but it's worth to try right.

anyway, thanks for reading and commenting here ^^/

[aprilfantasie]

Take your time Yuki-chan~~ It will avoid your story to become a rushing plot ^^ It depends on your availability to write it...Yeah, it's worth to try it... Ganbatte!

[kuroyukisama_17]

thanks! I'll try my best XD

[mysteriousgal11]

First time commenting because arghh this made my heart go boom.
I like the flow of the story and also the ending, not all stories ended happily(?
)OTP based XD
But...I hope there'll be a sequel, even oneshot huhuhuhu YamaJima, onegai.

P.S. What will happen to ChiiTaro now?

[kuroyukisama_17]

ChiiTaro relationship here are a mystery... fufu~~

yeah you right, not all story will end happily. and sometime a sad ending will lead to a new beginning... XP

anyway thanks for reading and commenting here ^^/

[heysayjumper]

Wow just wow i have read many angst fics but this was so unexpected :o i am a hardcore yamajima fan but this ending is so realistic i admire how u wrote it. You know how authors get close to the ending and readers start who they want to end up together? Usually the writer writes what the readers want to read but wow you really surprised us.
I admire the way you ended this fic yuki-chan but yes im also sad about yutoyama >< sniff sniff my poor otp

[kuroyukisama_17]

haha.... XD I make the ending turn into AriYama...

thank you for liking and following my story till the end...

and thanks also for commenting here, I appreciate it so much X)