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Officer Tora's coffee boy - oneshot

Dec 01, 2010 14:45

Title: Officer Tora's coffee boy
Author: kurrren
Pairing: ToraxNao
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, fluff
Summary: 'Nao had worked at this police station as the so called ”coffee boy” for a total of 6 months and he had been infatuated with officer Tora for 5 months, 29 days and 15 hours.'
Comments: A gift for xcoffee_smilex because she's such a cutie.

( He looked up from his fiddling with the pink and black apron and a startled gasp escaped his lips as he saw officer Tora... Shirtless officer Tora.. )

toraxnao, fanfics

Comments 16

cherrylng December 1 2010, 14:08:32 UTC

It's a really good fic! ^^

But... I tried to read it and I got confused here and there, as if the start is the end and the end is the other way around @.@;;;

Overly shy!Nao is cute as he is~

But still, good job on this fic ^^

kurrren December 1 2010, 14:28:13 UTC

Thank you :)
Well I can't really understand how the beginning would seem like the ending and the ending as the beginning since nothing distinct happens in the beginning that is very end-ish 8D or well.. to me at least :)
Thanks for reading&commenting

cherrylng December 1 2010, 14:31:18 UTC

The story is a bit like scrambled words rushed into putting it there ^^;

Nao: What the-- How can I be THAT shy?!
Tora: You were so cute, even in Nico Nico, fans can't help but squeal at your cuteness~
Nao: I am not a coward!!! *a rubber snake drops on his head* O.O Ahhhhhh!!!! GETITOFFMEGETITOFFME~!!!!!!
Saga: Yep, scared AND cute~

kurrren December 1 2010, 14:56:24 UTC

Well that I don't know if I should take as an insult or not but oh well, I don't care much 8D

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kurrren December 1 2010, 15:12:28 UTC

ah yes, it's also my fave pairing 8D
And thank you :)

write_my_dreams December 1 2010, 18:46:42 UTC

Very cute. lol you bum, too lazy to wait until I got out of class XD

Glad you added more to the end. That was a good finish

kurrren December 1 2010, 19:19:29 UTC

Well I did have the whole day off... Can't wait for you now can I? XDD
Thanks for commenting (unlike me)~

write_my_dreams December 1 2010, 20:30:51 UTC

Haha true.
You're welcome (yes you bad non commenter)

kiryu_pandakun December 1 2010, 20:10:33 UTC

iih!
It's so cute and fluffy haha ^^ i like this very much.

kurrren December 1 2010, 20:32:29 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! :) (and p.s your icon is hilarious)
Thanks for commenting! <3

kiryu_pandakun December 2 2010, 19:01:22 UTC

^__^ Haha it looked funny to me so i had to use it :D
Thanks for sharing! xD

erikaoi December 1 2010, 21:53:02 UTC

Gtemqgjamjdpgjn love it so much.so cute,adorable.nao!squeee.I guess tora knows&brave to take a step have to thank saga a bit huh?hehe

kurrren December 2 2010, 20:55:33 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3
And yes, Tora has to thank Saga 8DD