[fanfic] lucifer

[kuruk22]

Title: lucifer
Fandom: Pokémon
Summary: She cleans the taint from your hands and brings you redemption - a supernova to herald your rebirth.
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Friendship, Tragedy, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Angst, Character Study.
Warnings: speculation, religious themes (in both human and pokémon terms), character death.
Notes: The parallels between D/P/Pt'

Comments

[solarpillar]

I agree that this is one of your better works. It is very organised, the pacing is good and the concept well-used. Hat off to you.

I don't have a long comment this time because my intestines are still hurting today. It's funny how being omnivorous makes you believe that we have a choice in what we eat, but then when you decide to only eat meat and cereal it tells you "not enough fiber" and when you eat cold food or badly heated leftover it messes thing up and you're on the bed in pain not able to do much. In the end there's still no choice, we have to eat everything and properly. This must be why people think Lucifer was made to fall, the fruit made to be eaten and human made to want to kill themselves.

[kuruk22]

Thank you!

I was pretty proud of how this piece turned out, and it makes me happy that you think so too.

I have to say that I've thought a lot about those things that you mentioned in your last sentence there, and that my fascination with some of the aspects of religion and spirituality have to do with my uncertainty about some of its tenets. Writing pieces like this is my way of attempting to work those out for myself.

Sorry about your continued stomach pains though... I hope you get better soon!